Open Poetry #18 |
All of Heaven's Stars - A sonnet |
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
All of Heaven’s Stars - A sonnet He gave me back my life, he gave me love A love that still resides within my keep And every one of heaven’s stars above Illuminates his essence as I sleep They know full well that such a love as this Was never meant to happen nor impart The sorrow that is wrought as memories twist And wrap a tender warmth around my heart They only stayed as witness to the peace That filled me to the depth of spirit’s core Exquisite moments that would never cease To rapture all the stars at heaven’s door Both they and I in all eternity Will never know the way love comes to be Elizabeth Santos |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Oh, Elizabeth!!! ::sigh:: how lovely... I feel rather inadequate to the task of being the first to respond to this.. what words can I say that will be as sensational as those you have written? I am mute in my admiration. Hugz, Pepper |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
excellent sonnet Elizabeth - Beki applauds! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you write such gorgeous words filled with the beauty of true love! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, we all love you so much! May true happiness sing in your heart forever! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I emulate Peppermint's inability to comment adequately...sometimes, words of thanks are just not enough... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
A perfect "Santos Sonnet" - da dum beautiful my dear friend. ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is very beautiful. It flows like a dream. Sandra |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
This was such pure pleasure to read, floria |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Awesome.Standing ovation. I love it. peaches |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* this is absolutely stunning......it flows with such perfection...how I wish I could write with talent like you have. Magnificent. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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heather_kitn Member
since 2001-12-07
Posts 61In The Kokapelli's Song |
Such beauty in words (especially yours). Such love. Exquisitely penned... -heather I do not seek...I find! |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
I like this Liz..very nice write!! Nathan |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Many thanks for the kind responses to this poem. Your words warm me Liz |
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