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Drowning |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers 
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Standing still Foggy surroundings Reaching out Hands feeling around Resting on none In search Of a goal I can't see Where should I go? Aimless and desperate Praying for light To pull me out Darkness drains from me Strength, hopes and dreams Soon I will drown Save me! _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Looks like you are in need of a handsome lifeguard from Baywatch...James |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
I was going to, you know, quote one section.. as we sometimes do.. but darned if I could find one I loved more than the whole thing... You've really put those emotions out there clearly.. if you need light.. I'll hand you a candle.. if you need a rope to help you climb out.. I'll hold you anchor.. if you need a hand.. I'm right here.  Hugz, Pepper |
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mauddib Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 119melbourne australia |
We stand on solid ground, treading water, till we drown. Your poem got me thinking. Not many poems do that well done |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) So very sad, sweet friend, we are all here for you if you ever need someone to talk to, all of us will be so happy to help! (kiss on cheek) So sad but beautiful, sweet friend, may you follow your heart and spread your wings and soar with a smile of hope and love! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Florence, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Mon Cherie,very desperate feeling poem.Expressed it very well!   Juanita |
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Fallon Junior Member
since 2002-01-07
Posts 21USA |
I guess I feel as long as we can cry out we are going to make it.....hope so 'A word is dead when it is said, some say. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Everything will be alright. I'm an e mail away if you need a good listener RP |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Thanks everyone... Yeah, maybe I do need some cute hunky Baywatch guy to rescue me from the waters, or maybe some highpower torchlight to get me out of the fog. But I'm just happy to be able to write about it, and post it here. I'll thank you for even just reading it, and not replying...  THANKS! _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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