Open Poetry #18 |
There you go again |
SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
There you go again Running to your mom Everytime we have a fight Right out the door you go I wonder if you’ll ever grow And leave your mamas side A man who is your age of 46 Should have left her long ago Standing on your own two feet Is something you’ve never done After all this time with you I want to go back home © By Sue 1-1-02 |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sue, Life is too short for such chaos. I wish you well. Seems your new year should only get better! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
why do they DO that? I had one like that and I hated it! (especially since his mom adored me and loved me just like her own daughter) |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ditto! That is why I am single by choice now! Great poem I am sure many can relate to, and both men and women! ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This sounds very frustrating Sue. I really enjoyed the ending ... you captured the aggrevation well with your closing lines.... "After all this time with you I want to go back home" Best wishes, /Kit [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (01-02-2002 07:29 AM).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetFriend~ I 'know' this feels so frustrating to you ... You've written the frustration well. Big hugs to you, sweetie~ You are in my prayers, my friend~ *Hug* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Hmmmmm Now why do men do that, Mine did it a lot when we were younger, but we moved away. Hey thats a great idea..Move...good luck and I loved the poem. floria |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
that would make you want to bang your head on the wall--and his...lol There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh yes...so many of us can relate...well done! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Sue, I can understand how aggravating this must feel, it seems he is not being a faithful person and still is acting immature. (sigh) I pray with all my heart he can turn to you first and sympathize with your feelings! (sigh) So sad but well-written, sweet friend, we all love you so very much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
You tell him, Sue! You don't need a momma's boy...you need a MAN!!! like me! |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
I know the feeling TOO well..My ex always always ALWAYS, ran to his mom and told her EVERYTHING! Even private stuff that we argued over. It was rediculous, and he was 25 years old. His mother wasn't very fond of me, she was the type of mom who felt that no girl was good enough for her son. therefore the two of them would gang up on me often, so he and I didn't last. I wish you the best though! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Thank you all for your responses! Larry I know life is too short for so much chaos. I have hung onto hopes for nearly 8 years hoping it would get better. passing shadows I have spent alot of time racking my brains trying to figure out "why". I give up. If you ever figure out the reason, please let me know. Mysteria Believe me, when this one is over, I am through. Kit and Marge Yes! It is very frustrating. strbbux You wouldn't believe how many times I have tried to get him to move away. He just won't budge. He always has a million reasons wht we can't move. Jamie Yes it does. Sunshine Thank you. Mistletoe Angel Thank you so much. You are such a sweetheart. Balladeer LOL! That is exactly what I have told him. RosePetal Sounds like you had the same kind of mother-in-law as mine. |
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