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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-01-13 09:47 PM

Rest my love, for the night has come
Sleep, let the vision arrive
My precious,your dream love awaits
Awaken only as I leave again.

Feel the softest caress of your face
let my lips touch, taste your own
My hands flow over smoothest skin
I rest lustfully here beside you.

Taste the crushed grapes of passion
Feel the hottest fires of desire
Reach out to my waiting arms
Together we scale highest peaks

Dawn brings the ebb of our tide
Light replaces the shadow
I depart once again
Our lust fed, our hunger sated.

[This message has been edited by Magnus (01-13-2002 09:57 PM).]

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2002-01-13 09:52 PM

This is very warming verse

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2002-01-13 09:55 PM

A kiss of a dream...lovely...

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

3 posted 2002-01-13 10:42 PM

Magnus...Passion bursts forth from every word of this poem. The heat of the moment wonderfully expressed. ***Ivy Rose

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2002-01-13 11:36 PM

ahhh. . . this one brings on a yawn of contentment Sir. . .

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

5 posted 2002-01-13 11:40 PM

Sweet dreams..

no criticism here ha..

~Victoria~

"To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides."
~ David Viscott

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

6 posted 2002-01-13 11:43 PM

Magnus - very nicely written, full of your warm words...

BC

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-01-14 03:07 PM

(sigh) Soooooooo sensually breathtaking, sweet friend, you always make me sigh with your gorgeous declarations of love! (big hugggssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is sheer beauty! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

8 posted 2002-01-14 03:10 PM

I;m with noah on this one..You make the both of us sigh! You my friend, are an incredible writer

Joanna

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

9 posted 2002-01-14 04:00 PM

" the crushed grapes of passion" how beautiful are those words. lovely poem. floria

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

10 posted 2002-01-14 05:38 PM

These shadows know all, see all, do all!!!
Excellent description, powerful piece.
The most pleasant of dreams to you my friend.

J. K. Mitchell
Member

since 2002-01-12

Posts 311
GA

11 posted 2002-01-14 05:43 PM

You are the best.
Emotions pour from your words.
Magnificent!

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

12 posted 2002-01-14 05:45 PM

Magnus,
I love the passion and desire here.I have missed reading your writes.
Peaches

A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

13 posted 2002-01-14 07:08 PM

you do passion very very well....

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

14 posted 2002-01-14 07:10 PM

*sigh* surely the stuff dreams are made of...wonderful writing that touches the heart of us all. Well done, Magnus. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Canuckster
Member

since 2002-01-09

Posts 285
New Mexico, USA

15 posted 2002-01-14 07:38 PM

Very tender and relaxing. I enjoyed the read.

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

16 posted 2002-01-14 07:58 PM

Very romantic!

I do say, you are giving Sven a run for his money in the romance department of poetry!

Corinne

brianbeaudry
Member

since 2001-07-20

Posts 410
Northern Ontario Canada

17 posted 2002-01-14 08:01 PM

Very well done my friend, gentle yet passionate, lustfull yet romantic!!!

Words expressed without deception...Are the beginning of a poem's conception

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

18 posted 2002-01-14 08:07 PM

Dawn brings the ebb of our tide"

tender is the dawn, that brings such love....beautiful~

Lauren~

Tomorrow's another day
and I'm thirsty any way
so bring on the rain

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-14-2002 08:07 PM).]

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

19 posted 2002-01-15 03:51 AM

Magnus~
Wonderfully romantic read~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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