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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Penmanship Like a deep blue sea’s growth of sponge This blank page allows me expunge A purge of words to follow through An inkling of scripts’ black purview Have you e’er seen my penmanship? A bit of lilt toward sight’s worship Of quill and ink, and parchment white And scented oh so very light… That a computer might just see That hint of slight calligraphy A wending of a desire sought To rent one’s heart as it was taught A gift received of ribbon, pen For script well written, age of ten ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 13 January 2002 [This message has been edited by Sunshine (01-14-2002 10:09 AM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Sooooooo beautifully penned, sweet friend, your quill always sings with sunshine and envelopes passions into poetic excellence! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, this is such a fabulous sonnet! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karilea, Very nicely done and I would give you an A+. I used to have lovely penmanship...'bc' before computer, when letter writing via snail mail was still quite the thing. Now I try to sign my name to a check or card and even I can't read it!  Loved this one! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You are on a roll today....keep on rolling.. Mannnn...you are really cookin'..... |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
I have to agree with Nancy, but then, mine wasn't too sharp to start with and I shudder at it now...very nicely done, Sis..very gentle smile |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I envy people who have beautiful handwriting sort of mysterious isnt it.. why some do and others dont..enjoyed Karilea ~Vic |
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Canuckster Member
since 2002-01-09
Posts 285New Mexico, USA |
Right on! Computers have robbed us of the subtle clues to another person in the subtle examination of the written word. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank God for computers. I write like a doctor. But you write beautifully!  -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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