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Recollection of Recall - or - Intellectualism's Intent....or....
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Recollection of Recall ~ or ~ Intellectualism’s Intent or...Snippets Courtesy of Sy's Inspire ~*~ Thus in pall of pale moonbeam all things are as they seem a bit of recall of the rose a fragrance sweet to this nose a bit of floral atrophy this dried rose of memory ~*~ So Sun shall shine on Randy and thee in hopes of offering harmony a bit of shine on aged domain then sing a bit of that refrain For with the princess and her prince I am ever more convinced that reality has its place, all right, but dreams are good for our respite ~*~ My strings were pulled by others, dear who did not allow me my morning cheer I saw in wonder with near dismay this which almost...got away! ~*~ Run across a note, an old letter? Aye, 'tis how I first met her 'twas how she gave me my insight, and why, Sir, I write the night... ~*~ This seems to me a mighty weight a feel that I have come too late but better late than never, friend we'll stand together in the end... ~*~ Should every bride be seen by groom, in love's light, then there's room for them to grow old, side by side in love's light, groom holds his bride ~*~ In this quiet circumspect I find a Fellow I respect who weighs his way of pondered say and leaves me smiling through the day ~*~ So lend to me your heart my dear uncovering secrets we hold near that all might see what draws us nigh poet, poetess seek Shangri-la's high ~*~ You stand apart from all the rest putting thought to stress of test just when I think you've wrote your best you come back quick in style and zest... ~*~ I tripped the light fantastic on the brush of painter's stick on the candle's lighted wick in the dream of rush so thick And I drew it to me... ~*~ With sing of song and lilt of rhyme I read you every single time you wend your way into my art as Keeper of this poet's heart... So bathe away in glorious glee as long as it brings us poetry... ~*~ I've read you long enough to know all you say might not be so but still you tug this string on heart well wishes then I would impart… ~*~ When alone thoughts atone for all was done alone as one But let my friend come on through all past is past we see new views... ~*~ The willow has a special song that she leaves behind one that layers gently upon my soft and fragile mind... ~*~ Crowned King Royal Readers remaining loyal Scepter is thy word ~*~ Dear Melancholy, sit with me while I brew some raspberry tea it seems the dragon's lost his roar but wait! What is that at my door? Seems the Moth Queen sits in light ~ now I shall watch Melancholy's flight... ~*~ I'll dance with you around the moon and tango through the night till soon we fall upon our leaves of dreams and count the glitter in moon beams! ~*~ In sweet repose you heard a song in Moth's wings you still belong ~*~ For as the sun would round the earth, as each new day is given birth you grant me well my lovesome's worth for I would rage before the dearth But with each flutter of your bye you bring complete one lovesong's sigh ~*~ It's chocolate chips and fingertips jello-smooth in rainbow hue a bit of Sy with by and by my start of day my gild of gay ~*~ Glad that dream finally rhymed it was well past your posting time... I was hitting the ceiling and walls going into Sy-withdrawals! ~*~ Sometimes the knowing is in the glowing and in the smile of Sy's worth-wile ~*~ Keep the dreams, hold them tight parody's but a scaremare in the night... ~*~ In grant the daily aptitude makes us all a little rude where has all the wooing gone? far and away, the flower's song... ~*~ The sing and song of the righted wrong entice one's belief a heart's relief... ~*~ ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 13 January 2002 [This message has been edited by Sunshine (01-13-2002 03:57 PM).] |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh my goodness! Now that was inspriration taken to a new level! I absolutely love this one, and into the library she goes! You made my day, this was simply stunning Karilea. ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"This seems to me a mighty weight a feel that I have come too late but better late than never, friend we'll stand together in the end..." I think I like this one best.....but you know it is darn near impossible to pick a favorite with you....  they are all fantastic!Seymour is an awesome poet, and your being so wonderfully inspired just proves it that much more  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"The willow has a special song that she leaves behind one that layers gently upon my soft and fragile mind... ~*~ Crowned King Royal Readers remaining loyal Scepter is thy word   BRAVO!!! OH MY GOSH, THIS IS BY FAR AMONG ONE OF YOUR BEST IF NOT THE BEST I'VE READ OF YOURS!!! Isn't Seymour just wonderful? (kiss on cheek) This is sooooooo brilliant, sweet friend, you conduct such fantasy and enchantment behind your words always, this is fantastic! We all love you so much, sweet friend, absolutely breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-13-2002 04:29 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Karilea...I KNOW Sy is sighing and smiling right now...Wow.... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW Karilea....You are a busy woman today! Excellent!...and I'll bet Sy loves this one! Hugs, Nancy ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
but dreams are good for our respite... as is your poetry Karilea! I just love it when we're all loving each other...grin. So often this question is asked of writers: "Where do you get your inspiration?" The only thing I can come up with is "people". This is poetic proof. Applause for you and smiles to our darling seymour. |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
With sing of song and lilt of rhyme I read you every single time you wend your way into my art as Keeper of this poet's heart... So bathe away in glorious glee as long as it brings us poetry... Very well said, Madame. A delightful read. ~Linda |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Karilea, I have a brutal cold but place my tissue aside just to say, I treasure with pleasure the write of this treasure. There can be no finer gift or up lift than this wonderful poem. You have shown me more grace than I can lace into this space and will answer somewhere somehow maybe from home. I only wish the subject was as worthy as the poem. I will treasure this for as long as there is time to do so. I will write you again as soon as I can clear my head. Love Sy |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Karilea, this is sublime. Seymour is indeed an inspiration and his poetry is always a heartful read. "In this quiet circumspect I find a Fellow I respect who weighs his way of pondered say and leaves me smiling through the day" Ditto. And the same comment is applicable to the musings of Sunshine. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This was so enjoyable..like a mini book of inspiration. Of course I have a favorite, though I love them all. For with the princess and her prince I am ever more convinced that reality has its place, all right, but dreams are good for our respite Smiling.. Sandra |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Simply love it when you get inspired.. which is all the time, right?? hugz, Pepper |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Very nicely written, Karilea. You are a good friend, indeed. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you, Poet-People, for sharing a bit of Sy with me. He is SUCH an inspiration, and these were but bits of snippets in response to his marvelous poetry. If you haven't caught him yet, please do so...he usually posts early in the a.m., before the birds are even up.... and believe me, he's WELL WORTH the read... |
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