Open Poetry #18 |
Autumn’s Dance |
brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
Autumn’s Dance Walking this bright autumn trail A trilling came to ear Soft and lovely was the sound Relaxing all my fear I listened to its sweet caress Searching for its source Sure to find an angel perched Trilling one more course Search as I may I couldn’t find The origin of this song All directions that I would walk It followed me along Its melody was rich and flowing Tempo filled with life Charging rhythm into my gate Ridding me all strife It’s trilling sang of nature’s awe Beauty shared by all The magic of this special place Its power to enthrall I never found this minstrels source Yet I danced to its strain Skipping along this autumn path I joined in its refrain The picture that inspired this poem can be seen at(http://community.webshots.com/photo/20860921/23149137ZaKTPmqSVM) |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oooooohhhh...this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, the beauty of autumn shines all around you! (big hugggssss) I love the autumn so much, this singing sparrow trills with you in this gorgeous vision! We all love you so much, sweet friend, your words are fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brian, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-13-2002 12:50 PM).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* you do know that I love this poem...its beauty pulls me into the world that fills my spirit. *sigh* Beautifull. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Autumn is my favorite season, and oh, I have so long to wait for it again, enjoyed.... Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
brian, you have captured the magic of the fall season expertly. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Brian...just ditto what my sister Nightshade said before me. *S* ~Warm hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I've heard that trill outside my windowsill and on that golden path I will find peace. Thanks once again, for a peaceful hike. |
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