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Love knows no patience
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Love knows no patience |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa 
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Love knows no patience Seven-thirty Eight-thirty Why must time without you fail in comparison? The same memories repeat Flashes of smiles Dangling curls Laughter God I love the way you laugh Billy says you can't hurry love My heart is racing Nine-thirty RINGING! (yes, hold on I'll go get him for you) Ten-thirty Thirty-one Thirty-two Yes mom, No nothings wrong, NOTHINGS WRONG, I’m going to bed Hey...if anyone calls? Nevermind, I'll be up Love knows no patience |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Yes, I remember this impatience of waiting for the phone to ring. Question though...why didn’t you call her??? We women are funny that way, we like the guy to be the one calling us!! I like this Kevin If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? [This message has been edited by Tracey (01-01-2002 11:17 PM).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling* well done.....A wonderful start to the new year. I love it.  **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
the uncertainty of it all---lol enjoyed reading this There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
this is certainly a new way to express love's impatience and very appropriate...oh how the telephone can be a important intermediate!Nicely done. Happy New Year  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetKevin~ 'The same memories repeat Flashes of smiles Dangling curls Laughter God I love the way you laugh Billy says you can't hurry love My heart is racing' I just love the anticipation in this~ Very, very nicely done, cutie pie~  Happy New Year to you dear poet~ Love ya'  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh Kevin you make me yearn to be young again. floria |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Kevin, You have been smitten...for sure! Love it.  |
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