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Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

0 posted 2002-01-13 12:49 PM

Blindsided
in an instant
I’d fallen in love with you

there is not a word to describe
how it felt

being in love
being loved
in an eternal beginning

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

1 posted 2002-01-13 01:30 AM

I know this feeling...yes, I know this feeling so well. As I've always said...you can put so much meaning into so very few words...yes, blindsided sums it up very, very well
Blindsided by a feeling
When first I met you there
Blindsided by a feeling
By a love that struck midair
Blindsided by a feeling
As your love melts into mine
Blindsided by a feeling
These hearts hearts are so entwined
Oh yes I know the feeling
Being struck by love like this
Oh yes I know this feeling
As two lovers share a kiss
So if by chance you’re wond’ring
If it happened just to you
My darling just remember
The blindside caught me too

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

[This message has been edited by Tracey (01-13-2002 04:53 AM).]

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2002-01-13 01:53 AM

Duncan - few words at times say the most, as this writing does. Excellent...

BC

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2002-01-13 01:55 AM

Love sure can make you stop in your tracks.
It sounds as if Love has captured you.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2002-01-13 02:53 AM

awww, Cowboy......
this is so touching

with all that you are...
with all that you know...
love......

peppermint35
Senior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 1106
Texas, USA

5 posted 2002-01-13 04:30 AM

Oh yes.. I've been blindsided.. and it feels sooo good

Enjoyed the read very much.

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
Percy Bysshe Shelley

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

6 posted 2002-01-13 05:15 AM

Duncan,
good write in so few words.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

7 posted 2002-01-13 09:04 AM

No, there really are no words/word for this but you come hauntingly close.

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

8 posted 2002-01-13 10:19 AM

Duncan,

What a wonderful feeling to share with us

Thank you cowboy

I can't wait to read more.

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

9 posted 2002-01-13 10:20 AM

"An eternal beginning", this says it all. great poem. floria

Canuckster
Member

since 2002-01-09

Posts 285
New Mexico, USA

10 posted 2002-01-13 10:28 AM

ANother of those less is more type poems. You give just enough to trigger what for most people is a familiar, yet eminently indescribably feeling.

Well done.

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

11 posted 2002-01-13 10:31 AM

A wonderful description of God's most wonderful gift!

-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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