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SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2002-01-01 10:35 PM

As I was driving home one evening
I saw the sky turning many colors
As the sun disappeared into the night
The sky turned orange as the sun left
Colors of pink and blue I saw too
It was such a beautiful sight to see

My passion growing stronger within
As I thought about the love we share
Holding each other in loving arms
Feeling the warmth from within you
As we lay there close to each other
It was a night I wish would never end

Lying here underneath a twilight sky
Enjoying every single moment with you
Feeling your gentle touch on my skin
Sends great desire all the way through
As you hold me so close to your heart
While we ly here beneath a twilight sky

© By Sue 1-1-02

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2002-01-01 10:50 PM

*sigh* so very romantic...there is nothing like a twilight sky that seems made for two lovers to express the passions that burn in their hearts. BRAVO!!! I love this poem, it's feel and vision. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Jamie
Member Elite

since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

2 posted 2002-01-01 11:07 PM

as startime said--there are few things more romantic than a beautiful sunset--- lovely poem

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2002-01-01 11:25 PM

And may you have a Happy New Year with many twilight nights like this.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-01-01 11:29 PM

(sigh) You are sooooooooo romantic, sweet Sue, this is sheer romance at its best! (kiss on cheek) May you forever share each sunrise and sunset with the love of your life in happiness! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

5 posted 2002-01-02 03:19 PM

Colors and love are so intermingled aren't they? I love writing about color also and the images one can relate to the person reading. I did enjoy this.

'Fiction is the truth inside the lie.' ~Stephen King

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-01-02 03:27 PM

Beautiful Sue....full of lovely imagery and very lyrical.
Enjoyed, Nancy

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2002-01-04 12:05 PM

SmartChick~
SweetSue ... you nailed it, babe~
In this twi-of-light sky ... I 'felt' the vivid warmth of the colors~

Perfectly done ... you let it flow and the passionate colors blended into a lovely, lovely piece~
Way to go, gal~

Love ya', my friend~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

8 posted 2002-01-04 12:08 PM

SmartChick - loved the title to this, just great. And I loved the poem, warm feelings it gave...

BC

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