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Our Forever Love Song (dedicated to lovers everywhere)
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Our Forever Love Song (dedicated to lovers everywhere) |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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Our Forever Love Song Waves breaking on a timeless shore such soothing music to the soul A sound the spirit can’t ignore, these healing waves that make us whole The winds caress in sweet refrain so gentle on the ears that hear To smooth the brow and ease the pain kissing away the lonely tear A melody whispers through trees that enfolds us in their embrace As life puts a sore heart at ease erasing lines of strain from face Natures sounds aren’t my only choice there’s a sound that lifts all day long My heart soars when I hear your voice singing our forever love song Karen Torbiak 2002© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. [This message has been edited by Startime (01-12-2002 03:37 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may the love of your dreams come to your heart and forever fill your heart with the song of true love! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, you always make these pages swoon! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Karen - Another beautiful, romantic write. Very good. Dave |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Karen, isn't it true that so many lovers have their own special song. This is tenderly romantic in every way! Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Noah...thank you so much, sweet friend...maybe someday but in the meantime I get to enjoy watching others fall in love. **big hugs** Dave...thank you.....I am so glad you liked it...I just can't seem to write much of anything but love. **big hugs** Kay....*grin* you are so right...my phantom lover sings to me a song filled with the sounds of the ocean and winds...**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful as always Karen!  Lovely romantic write. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
yet another beautiful write...I sometimes sing to my poetry...it helps make the words flow...you are such a romantic lady Karen.. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Very romantic, Karen.  -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Karen....they changed your pic... Looks very nice...I am sure everyone will love it as well...A beautiful face to go with all of your beautiful words... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Karen, this is a really tender love song, and it flows as if on a gentle breeze. Nice new picture too, you look great in red! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Ah, Karen, no one writes of love as you do...another beautiful effort here once again! |
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