Open Poetry #18 |
the Experiment |
ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
the experiment standing astride the experiment he looked like just another bum with a midnight soul and lighthouse eyes The Feed the Children bucket loomed large while the ten-spot danced a sirens allure in his pockets were a stack of other Ten's 100 dead presidents on a baited hook that could give life if others gave of themselves and he watched and waited hoping his jaded heart would be wrong puerile gangbanger with evil colors snatches the ten, buries it in boxers RavenBlack haired young mother with five ducklings in tow looks at them, then her cross on neck with hesitant hands thanks the cross and gently tucks the Ten in a tattered pocket Gucci-loafered with meta-quaffed hair boldly snaps the ten into his wallet with nary a second thought, diamond rings glittering their obscenity on his JpaulGetty-stained fingers the bum with lighthouse eyes then shed melted hot tears from frozen lament because these were the only exceptions that kept a strangers money out of 100 opportunities for parsimonious greed the rest . . . Fed the Children |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
ShadowRider, I don't believe I've read your work before, I would have remembered such passion. So welcome from me. I will definitely be reading you again though if this is the standard you write to. Very,very well constructed. Write on Kethry. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Shadow, Enjoyed this read very much. |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Kethery, what an extraordinarily sweet reply. awwwww I would venture to say almost all of my work, save for the romantic ones, are in this obscure style. *smiles* I posted at another now-defunct site, when i have time to. Tis nuttin' but a pleasure to be here. Honored and flattererd, sweet Lady. And thank you. tSR |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Seymour Thank you for taking the time to read, perhaps enjoy, and reply. That was sooo nice of you. Have a great day, and keep your smiles handy for all strangers. tSR |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
It is nice to read your poetry again.. hope you stop by more often TSR..enjoyed as always ~Victoria~ "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides." |
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