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A Ghosts Impale
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A Ghosts Impale |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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A Ghosts Impale I laud the mantra of her mind The moth that flies to close to flame I bask in phrases that I find That shines the edges of her aim. She wiles me with her wings of sigh Relaxes me to full surcease Those flights of fantasy we fly Within the valleys of release It’s true its only part of me And part of her that couples there We drink this cup of pleasantry And sail within this phantom air. We touch and intertwine our hearts In transcendental revelry And pucker up our lips in starts That never really comes to be. How can I pose in ghostly veil? She is the rose my soul inhales. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sy, I hope JM gets to read this. Tis lovely indeed. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Keth, Thank you love. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thus in the pall of moonbeam all things are as they seem a bit of recall of the rose a fragrance sweet to this nose a bit of floral atrophy this dried rose of memory shucks, you inspired again...this may have to be a poem of its owem.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Yes indeed you have a good start there *L* |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Beautifully written Sy..I truly enjoyed ~Victoria~ "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides." |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh those last two lines did me in Seymour. floria |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Victoria, Thank you so much. *L* Floria, Thank you for the wonderful comment. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I laud the mantra of her mind The moth that flies to close to flame I bask in phrases that I find That shines the edges of her aim.  She wiles me with her wings of sigh Relaxes me to full surcease ============================== It’s true its only part of me And part of her that couples there =============================== We touch and intertwine our hearts In transcendental revelry And pucker up our lips in starts That never really comes to be. ( I see Randy got a line in)  *L*How can I pose in ghostly veil? She is the rose my soul inhales. =============================================== oh SY....OH *SIGH* *S* its US who bask in your phrases my Stinkylove You are the apply of my morning sigh You color my sky in hues of blue on high Bursting before my eyes like Fourth of July Blooming bouquets of butterflies by poetic imply You are the supply of my minds eye The reason I try to once again fly A dragon who's spry and still shy Neither of you, I could ever deny Upon this rhymed reply you may rely The answer why is in the winkie of my eye  *winkiewinkie*  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, That's good enough for me.  WW S. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
That last line seared through my soul  Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* absolute perfection.....I love the whole feel of this poem...BRAVO!!!**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
mine too Kathleen....mine too .. *sigh*  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this vision is breathtaking! I love it, sweet friend, makes me think of my Muse and mantra! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sy...flows perfectly...beautifully done as usual...you do it so well... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Amazing use of language, it weaves tenerness and longing. Enjoyed! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kathleen, Startime, Thank you *L* JM, Mine too. WW SNoah, Thank you my friend. Magnus, Your no slouch yourself. VAS, Exactly. *L* |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I miss me Stinky... How long was that cruise??? Oh yeah...11 days...*sigh* good grief its only been 4 *L* |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is simply wonderful, Sy. Most beautiful writing. Sandra |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Very beautiful indeed! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sy, I love the way you write! This one is no exception. Enjoyed so much this afternoon. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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