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Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2002-01-12 12:51 PM

Embracing Utopia
By: Noah Eaton
4/18/01

Among the tulips she stands
Kissing the crisp sweet misty skies
Her face glistening with warm light
Smiling among springs enchanted surprise

She dances with the tulips with me
Wrapping me in her sunshine
Yellow shadows of youth shimmer across my face
Sharing her fantasies with me, as I do mine

I cradle her against my enlightened heart
Her eyes are a million sonnets, flooding from her tears
When her lips speak, poetry of life kisses my soul
As her tears fall from her soft creamy face, screaming in joy when I am near

Lotus flames burn brightly against the blue bonnet velvet sky
As her lips meet mine, feeling heavens touch with my girl
Bluebirds fill the cottonwood trees, singing Sweetheart’s symphony
Smiling touching her angel face, reflecting the golden majesties of heavens world

I strum her silky marigold hair
Every stroke pure beautiful music to my ears
I hug her close with eyes closed, crying in joy with promise
That I’ll always be faithful to her, and accept whatever happens,
when I’m by her side for all these coming years

A such happiness fills me, holding a dream
Completely sure I am embracing utopia, as I hear her sigh, touching me
Her sigh echoes in mine, smiling as I say to myself
That God must have spent more time on her, my true love of my dreams

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-12-2002 12:51 AM).]

ParisGrl
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 610

1 posted 2002-01-12 01:30 AM

Noah,

This is a very beautiful poem my friend, I enjoyed it very much.

Take Care,
Laura

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2002-01-12 03:00 AM

Noah, this is a symphony of sense.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

3 posted 2002-01-12 01:54 PM

Dear Noah; You are a master of romantic poetry, painting a rapturous picture with a pen filled with the tenderest of a lovers kiss! Exquisiely done! Hugs, Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

4 posted 2002-01-12 02:06 PM

So she is Utopia, wow, what a nice thought, this is sooooo romantic. floria

HumbleBee
Member

since 2002-01-06

Posts 52
Kentucky

5 posted 2002-01-12 02:11 PM

How romantic...to refer to the love of your life as utopia...a beautiful romantic poem. You are so talented and I love your writing style

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