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dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

0 posted 2002-01-11 10:23 PM

(written for a friend..to his forbidden love

)

my forbidden love...
dont be gone so soon
stay
yet for a moment more
just out of reach of me
while the sun spills through your hair

smile for me before you go
let me see love
dancing in your eyes

reach for me
without lifting a hand--
no one must see...

i feel the heart of you
within my own beating vessel
i long for you...
every moment of every day
i yearn to touch you
to have you so completely...
every moment that i cannot touch you
leaves me cold
and wanting you more

i have such need to feel
what you feel
at the very same instant--
   be my bride...
we will live our dreams
   our book is already written
in our souls it dwells
we have only to live it--
you know our story line

kiss me in the shadows--
     for now my love
the shadows hold us
but soon
very soon
we may step into the world
together
with our freedom to prance
into the wild...

my forbidden love
dont stay too long away from me
my heart so craves you
my hands they ache for you--
this feeling inside
steals nod from my head
sleep from my dreams...

find me in your sleeping
caressing your soul
for it is all i may touch
right now...

my love
     my love...
i sigh
for words cannot convey
this elation

oh my love...

i will rest in your palm
where you hold every bit of me
your fingertips folded gently
into the pith of me
i fear nothing here
i know you will never crush me

know my love
     for it is intense...

-dgvarner
1-11-02

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"and even when we're apart, you beat around in my heart..."  -lonestar

[This message has been edited by dgvarner (01-11-2002 11:49 PM).]

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2002-01-11 10:33 PM

Such beautiful writing - just lovely!
~Roniece~

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-01-11 10:38 PM

Simply beautiful...but, with such an ache.
Very well done and enjoyed very much!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-01-11 11:06 PM

(sigh) Sooooooo heartwrenchingly beautiful, sweet friend, you are sooooooo romantic! I pray with all my heart that your friend's dreams come true and this love will forever be entwined to heart and happiness will conjure forever, just as we wish you the greatest happiness! (kiss on cheek) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

4 posted 2002-01-12 12:04 PM

i have such need to feel
what you feel
at the very same instant--
be my bride...
we will live our dreams
our book is already written
in our souls it dwells
we have only to live it--
you know our story line

Forbidden love written perfectly!

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

5 posted 2002-01-12 08:24 AM

dg,
It made me ache with the reading of it.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

6 posted 2002-01-12 08:42 AM

thank you RONIECE!
NANCY..thank you much!..
NOAH..thanks a bunch!
DUNCAN..lol..thats the very verse i question each time i read it (sounds a little choppy to me..?)..if you like it, maybe its alright...

thank you!
KETHRY..if you ache with the reading, i have written it well...

thank you!

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"and even when we're apart, you beat around in my heart..." -lonestar

Parker
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since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
ON

7 posted 2002-01-12 11:57 AM

Wonderful write sweets, very moving. I just love the forbidden love concept.

Parker

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

8 posted 2002-01-12 07:16 PM

PARKER..glad to know i can 'move' you...

glad you enjoyed..

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"in the darkness of my lonely room, i pray that you wont fade away too soon" -blue rodeo ;)

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

9 posted 2002-01-12 09:20 PM

DG...you have penned the emotions well...I
am sure your friend will be pleased with
what you have given them...

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

10 posted 2002-01-13 01:58 AM

MAGNUS.. he says it is perfectly correct, but he wanted a steamy one! lol thanks for reading...

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"in the darkness of my lonely room, i pray that you wont fade away too soon" -blue rodeo ;)

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