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Open Poetry #18

A Dimension

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

0 posted 2002-01-11 10:18 PM

                                A Dimension
                                A wave of the moment in time
                                Created by a memory
                                But repeated
                                Like the skip on a record
                                        It's rhythm
                                        Unnerving
                                Yet devouring the mind
                                With it's intensity

                                A quick diversion
                                And the dimension escapes you
                                Reaching and grasping
                                For your conscious state of mind
                                But successfully
                                        Retreating
                                Into your darkest recesses
                                        Dormant
                                In wait of it's return

mirror man
Senior Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 814

1 posted 2002-01-11 10:32 PM

Oh, do I know this ever. This is what I would call terribly good. But definitely good.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2002-01-11 10:34 PM

amusemi,
good write.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

3 posted 2002-01-12 10:52 AM

A write from another dimension..kidding.. fathom that! Great write amusemi, wish I could could figure out the secrets of this one and the fourth dimension too.

[This message has been edited by ecrivan (01-12-2002 10:52 AM).]

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