Dear...., Love letter challenge

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A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

0 posted 2002-01-11 07:22 PM

Dear whats your name,

Should you ask,
have I gotten over you?,
hmmm, good question. Have I?
Most of the time I think I have,
then you invade my thoughts.

Have I gotten over the anger?
Anger? What Anger??
ohhh, that anger.
Well, no actually.
In fact we have become
fast friends,and have gotten
to know each other very well.

Have I gotten over the pain?
No, you see it has become
a part of me. I don't think
I could survive without it.

Should you ask, have I risen
above the self-doubt?, I don't
know, am I worthy of such heights?

Should you ask, have I gotten
over you?, no, but ask me again tomorrow.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2002-01-11 07:27 PM

Oh gosh....I love this!!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

2 posted 2002-01-11 10:18 PM

Beautifully written.
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-01-11 10:27 PM

Annie....very clever, and very very well done!! Enjoyed this tonight!
~Hugs Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

4 posted 2002-01-11 10:39 PM

A Whisper's Caress,
ask me again tomorrow, do I still love this and the answer will be unequivably "YES!"
Write on
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

5 posted 2002-01-11 10:46 PM

wow - I love this piece - Brava!
~Roniece~

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

6 posted 2002-01-11 10:52 PM

Annie,
What a totally awesome zinger! Way too cool. Boy, you nailed this one and I love it.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-01-11 11:02 PM

(sigh) Sometimes it takes time to get over anger and sorrow when it draws upon uncertain love, but in the end, forgiveness and comfort will be made! (kiss on cheek) Soooooo well said, sweet friend, we all love you so much! BRAVO!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Annie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

8 posted 2002-01-12 12:08 PM

Sure glad I'm not what's his name. Different write for you...I liked it.

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