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A Moth's Quest |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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 A Moth’s Quest Eyes of her are The whys of cries Never heard She clings tenacious With rapacious Guilelessness Caught in light Beyond his flame Flash-frozen But silken green Sheds moonbeams Of reprieve Such is so, She still Believes Never tell her She cannot Fly Or she will Have to set You free [This message has been edited by Sunshine (01-11-2002 11:05 PM).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari darling sister of my heart this is truly one of the best you've written. You're lines are always special this moves so smoothly and it's gentle just like a moth touching a hand. Wonderful writing darling girl utterly utterly wonderful Into my library with you   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Beautifully written, Karilea... Moths are butterflies who fly around in their underwear!  copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
I agree with Madame Chipmunk, except that moths are butterflies, flying around in my underwear.  Thanks.-newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (01-11-2002 01:38 PM).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Eyes of her are The whys of cries Never heard She clings tenacious With rapacious Guilelessness Caught in light Beyond his flame Flash-frozen ================================= Shhhhh .... Listen .... can you hear it???? its the fluttering of moth wings ...taking this one for her own..wrapping it up in emerald butterfly kisses and placing it in her treasure chest. *S* Luna lovely my sweet Sun     |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
we are drawn to this particular thread aren't we oh well........... Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love moths and butterflies, they're so free and graceful and bring a smile to my face everytime! (kiss on cheek) May we forever be drawn to the light of happiness like a moth and the lamp! We all love you so much, sweet friend, such whimsical grace fills your words! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Wonderful poem of a much neglected little moth. floria |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Sunshine - very well done - oh yes. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
do love this one |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love it Karilea....just love it!! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea--You touch the truth of mothiness...I just loved this..for many reasons. |
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