Open Poetry #18 |
The Journey That Remembers The Kindness |
D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
(First two lines from “Taking Liberties Of Kindness”) As the child of the street Continues the journey She will remember her teacher Who was so hard on her That they cried within Why did he abandon me But the truth was already known within For she was on her own path And he was just a guide Staying just long enough to not interfere Instilling added thoughts to those already there But why could you not be my crutches And let me lean on you Then she remembers something said That a tree can have a guiding stick But soon it must be removed For it to grow on its own way To create branches extending in freedom So teacher of the moment I finally understand Why did you not teach me more Then you remember the pain in his eyes When you used him as a pawn To get the things you did not have So you drained him blind And in that darkness within him He commanded respect And showed the door Sorry you may now feel The door is still closed tight His eyes having gained light And will never look your way again Or will they That is the horror that was left in you For your teacher is not there to ask On your journey of self respect You gain ground And fertilize others in a special way In the hardness that commands respect For that teacher that started you up A ladder so tall That the sight is now clear Your answer comes one day From a name you do not remember Of a of the child of the street Who was on her journey In a poem on the Internet of love As you cry your waterfall You state teacher I found you D.Lester Young (01/11/02) Tuscaloosa, AL Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry) |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) Soooooo well-explained, sweet friend, we all grow up like a tree, staked with support by our loved ones, then we grow, capable with the power of love in standing on our own and being burtured by the love of another, like the rain that falls and makes life bloom and bud with joy on a tress branches! (sigh) We all will learn from one another, and as we grow, our golden hearts do too! God Bless You, sweet friend, your words are always so edifying and wonderful! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lester, thank you for sharing! May love and light alway sshine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh my gosh........this had the tears flowing so strongly...Absolutely stunning...I love the ending.....it made me cry all the harder still. Magnificent. I love the way your heart writes. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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