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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Confession Although Randy offers candy He is of late slightly bandy. A little shorter in his height And glasses help him with his sight. His weight has turned a little paunchy Though he remains just as raunchy His woo is better than his do That I’m afraid is very true. He moves more often in the sun But never says why this is done He sits more often than he stands Though his mind more chaos than bland He talks and dreams like he’s eighteen In innuendos wintergreen But knows in fact he’s old in time Or should I say out lived his chime But never are our minds convinced That we are not princess or prince |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Never are our minds convinced indeed, for it it were so we would look in the mirror and fade away. Warm randy write here! *HuGS* Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Keth, And a warm  for you. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So Sun shall shine on Randy and thee in hopes of offering harmony a bit of shine on aged domain and then sing a bit of that refrain for with the princess and the prince I am ever more convinced that reality has its place, all right, but dreams are good for our respite... So says Sun  [This message has been edited by Sunshine (01-11-2002 09:38 AM).] |
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Canuckster Member
since 2002-01-09
Posts 285New Mexico, USA |
How true! Light verse serves this topic well and you handle this well giving humor and down to earth truth in a very well crafted marriage. Good job, sir! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, An excellent reply. Canuckster, A very literate and pleasing comment.  |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
Well, I don't wear glasses yet! Thanks for bringing a smile my way. It was well deserved from a poem so true! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Trew, Always glad to bring a smile. Thank you for the read. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy--Thanks for the smile...love your sense of humor! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, Well every bit helps. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling* you always bring a smile with your words...mmmmmm I confess.....I truly am a princess (NOT) *giggling* and I wouldn't want to be young again for anything...it is hard enough to be single now a days without all the heartache that youth goes through. **big hugs** thanks for the morning giggle. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Startime, A big hug and back. *L* |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Your words always make me smile, sweet friend, it is so hard to confess when we are always changing and being married to each day's detail! (big hugggsssss) I love it, sweet friend, BRAVO!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
In your witty and wise confession you speak of a natural progression perhaps hes got a touch of depression or a bit of a flu bug's obessesion He will regain his Randy expression His flame burns with inspiration's discretions He'll not retire to age's concessions He will retain his Dandy possession Let there remain no lingering question ... This Dragon will leave a lasting impression *winkiewinkie So Randy is feeling old is he??? By all these replies it looks like his lips are working just fine ROFL  Hmmmm .... I got just the thing for Randy ... I'll be back |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Very nicely written poem, Sy...but I haven't been here all that long, and so I am a bit ignorant...but may I ask please, who is Randy?  copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Now....tell me how Randys feeling ROFL      thats what I thought!! hahaha *winkiewinkie* (tehee) |
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OWG Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 155California |
way cool Seymour...enjoyed it |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Madame Chipmunk...perhaps this will help explain Randy until Sy shows /pip/Forum43/HTML/001270.html |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, True time marches on. Madame C, Well if you read Janet Marie, you got the picture, Randy is my alter ego. Thank you for your faithful reads. *L* JM, You really do keep tabs on me. Love it. WW S OWG, Thanks for the cool. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Now I understand it, Sy...  Thanks, JM for the link...and that was an absolutely awe inspiring poem about your personal dragon, Sy. copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Lyra and a dragon for your interest. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Syemour, you made me smile.. Mirrors don't lie do they? LOL floria |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Floria, Sometimes they do. *L* |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well done Sy! Thanks for the smiles! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sy, nothing like a little humor to put a smile on one's face...thanx...nicely done. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Thanks for the hugs. *L* Magnus, Glad it gave you a smile. |
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