Open Poetry #18 |
The Space Between |
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
The Space Between By: Noah Eaton 1/10/02 You came to me so lovingly You are all I've wanted to love and hold sweetly There's no shortcut through destiny But I want you so badly, sweet love The space between Our singing hearts Uncertain what kind of bridge we'll connect to each other The space between Pleasure and pain I just want to have you and fill your every hearts desire But will I ever get to have you? Will I ever have you? In my dreams you seem so real You have everything I dream of for a lover Writing poems to each other Talking happily and lovingly to one another But will I ever be the one? To hold you and love you dearly This survival of the fittest in passion I dare to cross The space between Pleasure and pain I just want to have you and fill your every hearts desire But will I ever get to have you? Will I ever have you? Look at me now, I never want to lose you I'm just a scared Romeo warding off my enemies to hold you Only time now can ever judge whether we'll be together... The space between Our hopes and dreams We hold each day, crying to be held in loves arms The space between Faith and fate Warring constantly for all our lives All we sacrifice Just for each other Only hoping that nature doesn't play cruel tricks on us The space between Pleasure and pain I just want to have you and fill your every hearts desire Hang on to faith Let's have faith that our love is true... The space between Tears and fears Where I cry on and on pleading to hold you The space between You and me... Hope is all we ever need And we can make our love be true forever... I believe in it... I believe in it... [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-10-2002 11:07 PM).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
There is a thin line between faith and fate when in love...just like love and hate..i think when you are in love you experience every feeling in the world..bad and good..from jealousy to forgiveness...love is a strange bed fellow ~Vic "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides." |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Noah - you always write so many beautiful words, whether your poems are happy or sad. My friend, you are indeed a great poet... BC |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Beautiful poem, Noah. Thanks for sharing it, my friend. There is no space between friends in God. They are together in Christ. I send you God's Love. -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (01-10-2002 11:39 PM).] |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Noah - I had to read this just because of the title. I am a big fan of the Dave Mathew's Band song the "The Space Between". I must say your words are just as good. Great writing. Dave |
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