Open Poetry #18 |
Auld Aquaintance |
catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
It seems the old aquaintance will not go away from heartstrings still though only sorrow does remain of what was once loves special flame. It haunts at times hard to ignore like New Years eve, I once adored this man so fiercely it was grand to feel the slightest touch of hands. It was ten years ago last night we spent our first time, reaching heights of understanding and of love And now, whats left? There's nothing of.. A simple message on a screen generic Happy New Years eve it seems a crime to come to this just memories of New Years kiss. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
I understand. Stay strong. hugs, J There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
catalinamoon - may the new year bring you peace, and serenity within.. A telling write in words you've penned... BC |
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thepoeticplumber Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 185 |
A sad but common theme. Alas! We will always have our past though. That is forever safe inside. Roger PS: And sometimes the future holds gems for us. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
well, now this makes me sad ((((hug)))))) I am/Kathleen/ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
I feel your pain and have shared much of the same...keep hoping and dreaming for there will be a true love who will not just kiss and leave your love to burn with pain. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Sandra, this is so sad! But, it's a new year now and onward and upward...chin up and give them a smile and a wink. You will be just fine. ~Hugs to you sweetie, love ya, Nancy~ *~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~* |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Your talent for lovely flowing cadence and rhyme is shining brightly in this sentimental piece Sandra ... beautifully written! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
And now, whats left? There's nothing of.. Ahh, Sandra, there is much left..what is left is the YOU and your incredible talent. What is in the past is only to help us grow, and I feel you are doing a good job of that...very nice write...and, you know, even the sound of 2002 seems right...very gentle smile |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Yes, sometimes the memories haunt for a very long time don’t they? Wonderfully written, but such sad reflection. Hugs to you sweetie, may the new year bring new happiness. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Sometimes it does come to this, doesn't it my friend? I think each of us has been there at one time or another. My best to you, Sandra. (((hugs))) Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Sandrs...know just how you feel...my hand in yours...helen |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sad sigh) Soooooooo sad and heartwrenching, sweet friend, always believe in your loving heart, for He is preparing the most beautiful love for you that will fill your heart with happiness eternally! (kiss on cheek) Hang on, sweet friend, love will find your heart! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
i had a note in the morning on the coffee pot haa..when i woke up..Happy New year it said..and hes living right in the same house haa...oh well..as least he made the coffee ha... ~Victoria~ "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Beautifully written, Sandra...I hope things get better and that you find someone new for them to get better WITH. Happy 2002 to you.... copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Catalina may you have the best of everything in the new year. floria |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sandra, Your writing still reflects sadness, but I am hoping with this new year you will have brighter tomorrows. I miss you so much and can't wait until our next meeting, the bug has hit with great forse so the holiday's were bed time BLUES! That was the best bottle of BOOZE you could of send me cause it didn't HURT a BIT! Love ya so, so much, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sandra....I have said a prayer for you.. for all the other ladies...at PiP and else- where that are going thru this same feeling. Lady...you are not anywhere near middle age...you just have to give yourself a chance...you will find what you are looking for... |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Very hard-hitting, Sandra...you will find what you are looking for...or it will find you |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Very sad write, Sandra. Those memories can be haunting at times, but remember the best is yet to come. Good expression. All writing comes |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Thanks everyone. Keep smiling Sandra |
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Robert A Member
since 2001-10-29
Posts 174 |
yeah, I know this feeling, tell me, why are all of these gorgeous women on here all alone? It don't make sense! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Memories are GR8! Now, go out and make some new ones! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. [This message has been edited by Interloper (01-04-2002 10:28 AM).] |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sandra, I'm with Interloper...Here's to new memories! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
There ya go, Sandra. If Larry sez it's so, then it MUST be! Raise your glass to new and exciting memories! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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