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I Await You In Our Dream
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I Await You In Our Dream |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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I saw you there upon the sands. You, in your flowing gown of silk. The moon reflecting off of a tear. The breeze caressing softest hair. I reached out to touch your hand. Only the emptiness of air was found. I tried to wipe away the lonely tear. I could not... I whispered “I Love You” in your ear. You could not hear the words. I hugged you, held you close, not felt. Dreams...only dreams... The distant sound of a horn. The only sound my ears could hear. The lights of a lighthouse warning. The stillness of the silence overwhelming. My dreams take me away from you. Within them, I am alone, searching. Reality, in my eyes soulfully stares. The vision, once clear, now a mist. I ask each night..each lonely night.. Let this man have a lady within dreams. I cry each morn, each lonely morn. As emptiness fills my mind. Come to me my darling, I await. A dream of joy awaits us each now. Sleep and live this moment with me. For my passions mount for you. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Magnus - dreams you may be having, but open those eyes, for she is standing with you... BC |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
BC...thanx...YEP...I know she is...but, being the poet...I love to write romance.. and this is just part of it.. I email in Ecards some of these...she gets a tickle from them... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is so lovely. I am/Kathleen/ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I love the way you romance her...it is so good to see a man who tries so hard to show his wife how much he loves her. BRAVO!!!A dream among dreams, my friend. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
YES!!....I mean...yes. *sigh* Oh my..... *~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~* |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Kay...thank you...and I broke one of your poetic behaviors...I wrote it and posted it at the same time...But I guess that it is OK..as is... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx Karen...when I get to where she gets about 60 percent of this intensity...well I guess she will be really flying in the clouds then...huh? Leave those oysters alone...I almost bought some tonite...but so expensive.. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Oh Nancy...what a statement you make in so few words...touches my heart...feeds me.. Thank You as always... |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Ah, how romantic is this? Awaiting her in your dreams. Sigh...what more can I say? If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Love, the way it should be spoken. Great romance here. |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Mr. "M": You certainly have outdone yourself with this one. Very seductive, but remember that if you cannot see her, she is always in your heart. Lovely indeed. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
OOOh this is wonderful, sensitive. floria |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
well done-- bet she loves this one  There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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