Open Poetry #18 |
A Dance Upon Roses? |
KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
My golden tresses of silk upon satin pillows do lay Dreams adrift with longings so caught up in sweet sleep Captivating Knight lyrics not forgotten by day; Lovesongs tempting my desires so deep. Gentle breezes blow through my window so fair; Oh... Is it thee my good Knight in my arms that I hold? Tenderly kissing my lips; strong fingers now running through my hair Fires warming my heart where I’d once been so cold. Passions, long kept captive in my secret place Dancing flames; fires burns ; passion ignites Oh how I long to gaze full upon your handsome face. Come hither now, love... closer,this enchanting night Oh be still heart! Take flight with gossamer wings of my loves delight; I call out your name, love.... and bid you to come; Enraptured of love and your whelm O Good Knight We two, intertwined passionately become now as one. Amidst moonlit persuasions and whispers of bliss, Fulfilling of dreams and promises, now kept The look of your eyes into mine...as our lips locked to kiss Or was it just a dance in the roses with you as I slept? Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Very well written, Koko - The romance of it is pure female, which is something every man should note. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, I hope that the knight of your dreams has swept you off your feet and has given you pure, chivalrous love! (kiss on cheek) May you always be the Guinevere of his heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! I LOVE IT!!! YAY!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Oh, KoKo, it is so wonderful to see you here again. How are you? This poem is ethereal and lovely in every way. Hope you are doing well. Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Soooooooo good to see you posting again KoKo....missed your wonderful poetry. And I'm glad that I was able to read this gem from you. (((hugs))) Charisma ~*Theresia~* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Koko, Enjoyed the dream and the write. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
KokoStewartKoomoa - this is excellent. Loved what you have written, and I love the bed of roses, my favorite flower.... BC |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Koko this is one of my favorites...I wondered a few times..."Where is Koko?" Glad to see you on these pages again...James |
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