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Love Song
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Love Song |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada 
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Love Song Soft music accompanies siren’s voice That serenades this lover’s moon With promises of sweet rejoice Love’s passion feeds this tune It’s silken notes does weave A tale of purity and surrender Tender as any could conceive Bursting with love's splendor Its lullaby strokes soft caress Titillating emotion’s peak Softly rendered with finesse Much longing does bespeak Woven keenly into silken limbs Wrapping lovers within its scheme Gifting passion to all whims In melody of a lover's dream |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Brian Such a warm, passionate piece of writing from you that was so very beautiful. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* oh Brian...this is so sensually beautiful. It sang to the heart and warmed the flesh...Well done. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. [This message has been edited by Startime (01-09-2002 10:20 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Softly sensuous, Brian...well done...and thoroughly enjoyed... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
........Oooooooooh Myyyyyyyyyy........ ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
'Bursting with love's splendor Its lullaby strokes soft caress' Very, very nice, with soft caressing strokes of the pen. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Brian, This is so softly romantic and lovely... I enjoyed this read  Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, you strum the heartstrings with such sensual and loving passion! (big hugggsssss) May this song of true love forever touch your heart, sweet friend, I love it!!! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brian, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
This is a most beautiful love song that I've heard. Thanks for sharing..._,,,^.^,,,_ |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
Sue, thank you for your kind comment my friend!! Startime...You have always been my inspiration!! Sunshine..Glad you enjoyed and thanks for commenting Enchantress...I take this to mean you liked it LOL Hugz southern neighbour!!Midnitesun...Rosepetals25 Thanks for your comments, they are greatly appreciated!! Noah, you have always been a great friend and fan as I am yours Mon Cherie...Yours is a most loving comment and I thank you!! |
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