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Touch the Keys |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Blame it on my new muse, my Fairy Laume, but melodic sounds are heard, as thoughts of my mother come to me, and I would share this again with you... Touch the Keys black and white sit alone and separate until you touch the keys like dipping fingers into milk and slowly, tenderly, making breeze touch with me feel the ease slowly glide your gifted hand across the keys of life pick me up and lift me in and ease me of all strife touch with me fingers that carry the stained and strained, carry refrain, accomplish the gain zephyr along the gift of day long into the night Rachmaninoff me away touch me and hear the music touch me and feel the notes touch me see what you've wrought deep within your rote touch me like the keys of bone touch me unlock the stone touch me to be yours alone touch me candlelight shall grace the gift of the music of your lift touch me and in the silk and satin day touch me as you shall play Tschaikowsky me in E flat waltz and play me never false touch me fingertips dipped in midnight cream under bright of moon light's beam and in this touch of E in the key of me a rhapsody sublime in the song of Karilea 01.01.01 revised 01.09.02 |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
My goodness - this itself is a masterpiece! I love the style, creative phrasing and sentiment that flows in this. It's refreshing to read your poetry again. This is beautiful, and perhaps one of your best  Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
It seems to me that Karilea Would be a full-blown symphony To fill the night with melodies For he who touches all her keys. Play on, dear lady, fill the night With sounds of orchestral delight And live your days in harmony With he who touches Karilea.. So I got inspired! So...??? |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Sunshine, This is simply wonderful. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I always wanted to play piano....I loved this poem. Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I heard the gentle tones of piano keys....how incredibly lovely. Magnificent. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Will "oh my" do? This was exquisite, and love Michael's response, your name almost seems like it should be sung. ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Sunshine - Music, especially piano, certainly does move you. Really liked subtle innuendos drawn between the playing of the piano and feeling of passion for another. Nicely done. Dave |
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Canuckster Member
since 2002-01-09
Posts 285New Mexico, USA |
This musical themed piece is itself music to the ear. This poem speak and you've done a good job of formatting and line arranging to make the music play brighter. never try to teach a pig to sing |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Sunshine, what a beautiful metaphor! I'm really touched. Only God could make such beautiful music, through you. Silver Streak Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karilea! You are amazing! I find I am always holding my breath while reading your work, and this one is no exception! This has to be my favourite now. Exquisite! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
This is quite neat! You touch us as you ask to be played. Very sweetly written, Karilea. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari darling sister of my soul YOU know I always loved this one of yours don't you. It is utterly utterly fabulous. I was going to say who let you out of the library, but I forgive you this beauty needs to be shared frequently. Truly one of your utter utter best darling girl. When your muse catches you look how wonderfully you fly As always Mushy    To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 STANDING OVATION!!! OH MY GOSH, HOW I LOVE YOUR MUSE, THIS IS SOOOOOOO BEAUTIFUL!!! (big hugggsssssss) Your thoughts of your mother shine through all your lovely words, sweet friend, she is so happy and lucky to have you, a very loving person with a symphony of love! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Sunshine, You are the instrument , He the musician, what a creative and lovely write, floria |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
hi Sunshine, your poem is truly exquisite and I'm saving it2my library cuz in a way your words touched my heart and drifted my spirit to a place in time that I wanna go back2again... Hugs2uSweetPoetFriendSunshine *~coco~* |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wow! Sunshine is a song, that plays a chord that brings me a memory..thank you for this lovely poem, and you! |
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