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strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

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0 posted 2002-01-01 05:44 PM

Her Dance So Sweet

With glimmering slippers,
She stays on her toes.
Keeping her balance,
With movement she flows.

Twirling with passion,
Faster and faster.
She the obedient,
Slave to her master.

She gracefuly bends,
With breathtaking movement.
I make the assessment,
She needs no improvement.

She dips and she bends,
With ethereal grace.
A beautiful glow,
Now gleams on her face.

The music is ending,
Slowly stopping her feet.
She now bows with elegance.
Her sweet dance complete.

Floria aka strbbux
© 2001

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

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1 posted 2002-01-01 06:25 PM

BRAVO!!!this is as beautiful and graceful as a dancer can be. I love the vision it created. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05

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2 posted 2002-01-01 06:29 PM

A beautiful picture, perfectly painted with graceful words, Floria.
I enjoyed it very much

copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

strbbux
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3 posted 2002-01-01 08:07 PM

Thank you startime, it is so good to share with other poets. floria

strbbux
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4 posted 2002-01-01 08:08 PM

Thank you Madame, I have enjoyed reading your poetry. floria

Kit McCallum

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5 posted 2002-01-01 09:46 PM

Floria, this has a lovely cadence and rhyme ... a beautiful flow to match the images that are elicited by the words of dance that you have painted here. Just lovely.

Best wishes,
/Kit

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

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6 posted 2002-01-01 09:49 PM

I always wanted to be a dancer but could never quite master it.

I enjoy the dream though....

'Fiction is the truth inside the lie.' ~Stephen King

ecrivan
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my own state

7 posted 2002-01-02 01:20 AM

graceful poem for the graceful art of dancing
Bravo!!

strbbux
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8 posted 2002-01-02 09:32 AM

Thank you Kit, you are all so kind here, I am so happy I found this site. floria

strbbux
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9 posted 2002-01-02 09:34 AM

Thanks Irish rose, I have always wanted to sing, hmmmm well I do, but not good..haha,,,nice to dream though. floria

strbbux
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10 posted 2002-01-02 09:34 AM

Thank you ecrivan,I so appreciate your reply. floria

catalinamoon

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11 posted 2002-01-02 10:53 AM

Beautiful, dancing can bring such joy!
Sandra

rosepetals25

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12 posted 2002-01-02 11:11 AM

Floria,

You have the perfect flow with this poem.. muchly enjoyed

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

strbbux
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13 posted 2002-01-02 11:38 AM

Thanks sandra and tara I really appreciate your comments. floria

Jamie
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Blue Heaven

14 posted 2002-01-02 12:50 PM

may i cut in?---lol

very nice poem-- enjoyed!

J

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

strbbux
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15 posted 2002-01-02 02:05 PM

Sure anytime LOL thanks Jamie. floria

His Poet
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16 posted 2002-01-02 02:54 PM

A pleasure to read as it flowed liked honey. I can just see ballet recitals with little girls in toe shoes and parents beaming, thinking their little girl is the most talented. Cheryl

LngJhnAg
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17 posted 2002-01-02 02:57 PM

Very sweet, indeed, Floria. I thought the poem was about you at first, and then the focus shifted so gracefully - I enjoyed this very much.

strbbux
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18 posted 2002-01-02 07:14 PM

Thank you cheryl, you made me smile. floria

strbbux
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19 posted 2002-01-02 07:15 PM

Thank you Lng, hmm wish it were about me. Oh to be young again ( and wise ) floria

JamesMichael
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20 posted 2002-01-02 10:28 PM

A pleasure to read...James

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