Our Time In Eden (Inspired by Elizabeth Santos)

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Our Time In Eden (Inspired by Elizabeth Santos)

Mistletoe Angel

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Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2002-01-09 02:12 PM

(Thank you so much for the beautiful inspiration, dearest friend, we all love you and your gorgeous words so much! (big hugggssssss)

Our Time In Eden
By: Noah Eaton
1/9/01

Laying in a milky ivory vale
Rolling in loves arms in the white heather
Sweeping off your feet in ginseng gale
Into paradise we shall sail
Making love on fields of leather

In fields of emerald and jade
I embrace your Muse so heavenly
You brighten my everyday
Like butterflies of May
Suckling the sweet tiger-lilies

Melting to your hearts sunshine
Sunstricken by the cupids philter
Your golden hair waves and I sigh
Admiring how it shimmers so divine
Humming terzanelles with refrains that never falter

My heart lifts like a kaleidoscope kite
Lifting high and happily to your love
There’s no end to my hearts delight
As long as you’re here with me every day and night
You have beaded my horizons with rainbows, sweet dove

Just looking into your eyes of jasmine
I know Our Time in Eden
Will be an eternal bliss
I can feel it every time we kiss
Falling in your luscious hearts heaven…

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-09-2002 02:12 PM).]

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

1 posted 2002-01-09 02:19 PM

What a beautiful picture you have painted here Noah. Very visual and descriptive. wonderful writing, floria

N orth Carolina Girl
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since 2001-12-04

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NC,USA

2 posted 2002-01-09 02:22 PM

Nosh,so very sweet and romantic.

Juanita

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Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

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Hurricane Alley

3 posted 2002-01-09 05:53 PM

Very romantic, but watch out for that frog I think she's got a crush on you!!!

Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29

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MA, USA

4 posted 2002-01-09 06:46 PM

Noah...Such splendid writing ability you have. This poem another example of poetic excellence. ***Ivy Rose

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

5 posted 2002-01-09 06:47 PM

Thank yoou, NOah, but I don't know how I inspired this gem, except for the rhyme scheme in "Humbled". Other than that, this is all YOU and very beautiful at that
Well done, my friend
Liz

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

6 posted 2002-01-09 11:51 PM

Noah, this is so pretty! You always draw me into your poems with your lovely discriptions! Well done baby

RP

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