Open Poetry #18 |
Heirloom Memories (repost) |
Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
We gained serenity from our vows to love and drew together in celebration young in spirit and heart we began our lives of collaboration Will our love survive to that golden time will your hand still reach out to find me will we still note each glance, each touch that guides us to our eternity Or will we blink and loose the sight of what was planned as love’s design will we turn and walk away from the world that is yours and mine Perhaps the future is best unknown each moment seen as a cherished token that combined with our love will ever be a bond that remains unbroken. When does a memory become an heirloom to be passed down from heart to soul when all the beautiful tomorrows become the yesterdays that make us whole |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
i like the strong ending and the sentiment o yuh |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) YAY!!! I LOVE IT!!! (sigh) I too feel that the most happiest way to cherish love is to cherish each and every day and not wait for tomorrow but rather let tomorrow become yesterday, of eternal days filled with loves happiness! (kiss on cheek) I love it so much, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
When does a memory become an heirloom to be passed down from heart to soul when all the beautiful tomorrows become the yesterdays that make us whole ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ This piece touches me, in a place deep inside that still believes long lasting 'forever' loves truly exists. Enjoyed so much! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
~Will our love survive to that golden time will your hand still reach out to find me will we still note each glance, each touch that guides us to our eternity Or will we blink and loose the sight of what was planned as love’s design will we turn and walk away from the world that is yours and mine~ so true....it could be written for me. Thank you for reposting this beautiful poem. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you for you kind comments!! This is one of my personal favorites. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is one of my favorites... and with the library of incredible poetry you've penned, that's saying a lot. *S* Thank you for reposting this beauty! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Poet deVine, Good question and a wonderful write. *L* |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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