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Logan
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since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

0 posted 2002-01-09 01:21 PM

As the droplets drift down window pane
my memories swirl to a dance in the rain
Your laughing voice with flashing eyes
with slippery tiles we made our tries

The place was closed, but we bribed to dance
in the misty rain which came by chance
An old man smiled as he turned on the tune
thinking we were as crazy as a loon

Sweet sounds surrounded as we moved
the old man nodded in silent approve
River mist did cloak, in silvery embrace
as I kissed the water from your face

Finally we moved to our own heard song
kisses on the wind, were carried along
That night we danced in the rain
to the tune of our own tender refrain

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2002-01-09 01:24 PM

Logan~

'River mist did cloak, in silvery embrace
as I kissed the water from your face'

Oh, to be touched by a memory like this,
is to feel the ecstasy all over again~
Beautiful, sweet poet~
*Hugs*
~*LittleGoose*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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SEA

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since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2002-01-09 01:26 PM

aaahhhhaa
now this is gentle....
and ever so romantic....

*sigh*
nothing beats romance in the rain
this is beautiful Logan

Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

3 posted 2002-01-09 01:28 PM

What a song, and such a dance
lending one to thought's romance
a tender tune upon the air
a bit of wisp in hand-held care

Need I tell you, this is lovely?

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

4 posted 2002-01-09 01:28 PM

Sweet sounds surrounded as we moved
the old man nodded in silent approve
River mist did cloak, in silvery embrace
as I kissed the water from your face

beautiful words logan..(River mist did cloak)
lovely..

~Vic

"To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides."
~ David Viscott

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-01-09 01:30 PM

Oooooh Logan, how wonderful is this? How many memories did it conjure up? Beautiful romantic images here, gentle poet.
It's a keeper!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2002-01-09 01:33 PM

enjoyed

Logan
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since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

7 posted 2002-01-09 01:48 PM

Ahh, Little Goose..there are always the memories that make us smile...very gentle smile

SEA, I keep trying to come close to how good you write romantic, although I am many steps behind your own tender flow, but yes, romantic in the rain is always special...very gentle smile

Ahh,Lady, what is lovely is your own lovely penning..Thank you for it...very gentle smile

Ahh, yes, Vic..there is something magical in the silvery sheen the mist brings..Thank you for your words and being here..very gentle smile

Nancy...very gentle smile..it always makes me happy when my few words can invoke the memories we all have..Thank you for your kindness...very gentle smile

Ahh, Vandana, having you here has made my day for me. Thank you for the read and the reply...very gentle smile

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

8 posted 2002-01-09 01:52 PM

So romantic! And any poem with a loon in it inspires magical dreamy thoughts in me. Thank you for this, it flows so smoothly.

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

9 posted 2002-01-09 05:29 PM

Oh Logan, you need to read your words through MY eyes

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

10 posted 2002-01-09 05:32 PM

Oh, how I love the rain. Thank you for this beautiful reminder of it...warm rain is
better though, cold rain well, warm is better!

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

11 posted 2002-01-09 05:32 PM

I would think you were fast moving into the shadowy nuance of being one of Passions' Best....

please, continue to please....

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

12 posted 2002-01-09 05:37 PM

(sigh) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, I've always dreamed of dancing in the rain with my dream girl Joanna and kissing her moist lips as the water slides down her face! (smiles) Soooooo tender and loving, sweet friend, we all love you so much! (sigh) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Logan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Logan
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since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

13 posted 2002-01-09 07:48 PM

Ahh, the call of the loon is one of the most haunting sounds of all..I am glad you have heard it, Midnitesun, for it is magic in itself...very gentle smile

Susan, very gentle smile, the point is...I have read yours through MY eyes..and my original statement stands

Ahh, Kathleen, the warm rain is the best, is it not? Thank you for being here, gentle soul...very gentle smile

Sissie, very gentle smile, you must have misposted this for someone else, but I will take it anyway...

Noah, then DO IT, so you will have memories to keep when you get old as me..gentle smile

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

14 posted 2002-01-10 10:30 AM

Reads like a dream, Logan. Rivermist...I think I know this place! Thank you for the dance, dear Logan!

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

15 posted 2002-01-10 10:41 AM

Logan--A very romantic dance, is the rain..but then, with romance and the right partner, anywhere is romantic. You have captured a mood with your words that is lovely!

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

16 posted 2002-01-10 11:54 AM

This is tender and romantic and an exquisite beauty... what a lovely memory! *S*

LngJhnAg
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since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

17 posted 2002-01-10 12:02 PM

hmmm... dancing in the rain. You devil, you. What a great read and romantic act.

CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

18 posted 2002-01-10 12:22 PM

Exquisite...
Logan, this truly is a superb write...
Smiles2uPoetFriend
*~coco~*

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

19 posted 2002-01-10 04:18 PM

Hello Logan
How very nice to see you again. Your words danced in front of my eyes as I was swept away with the magic of the moment. Your words spoke true love and displayed such a stunning picture of two people very much in love. I enjoyed this immensely and I'm about to read it again!
Take care my friend........Sue

Suetang

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