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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“JUST THINKING” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Listening to music, of a soft guitar, and I dream, don’t want to be apart… It’s soft, sensuous, and inside me, touching into, this fragile heart… Just like you do, when you’re near, but do I dare tell you, how I feel… I mean really, what should I do, it’s something, I don’t want to conceal… When you’re near, I feel different, my heart beats so fast, it soars… Should I just walk up to you and say, ‘hi, my name is BC, what’s yours’… Don’t really know what I should do, if I say something, would it be advancing… Maybe I’ll just pass it up, this time, but I’m not sure if I was, just thinking… ~~~~ [This message has been edited by Bill Charles (01-01-2002 04:42 PM).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
go for it, BC  I am/Kathleen/ |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Oh, take a chance!!! James Bond wouldn't hesitate!! I thought this was really sweet BC-your work is, as always, incredible! |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Go for it Bill! You'll never know what could happen until you try, otherwise you will spend the rest of your life saying "what if".. I enjoy your thoughts Bill : ) RP |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Always listen to your loving heart, sweet friend, and you will find all the happiness and love in the world! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, your thoughts and visions shine with beauty! HAPPY NEW YEAR, SWEET FRIEND!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
A yes is always worth the risk of a no. ...at least that is what i was just thinking There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
We here are all for romance, so you know my answer...go for it  Beautiful poem |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Bill, The vote is in, The ballots cast. The poets have decided, Don't let this moment pass. So suck it up, And step right out. My name is Bill, Just say it right out. For if you wait, It may be too late. But please hurry, you must, And then report right back to us! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I add my vote to the others...you need to let her know...Some lady is waiting to know that a very special man is interested in her. She is one very lucky lady to have captured such a romantic heart. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Very touching poems you write Bill, I like this one. floria |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bill darling boy this is wonderful I can feel the music, it's flowing through me. I really and truly love this it’s soooooooooooo very very good. The flow and the rhythm is wonderful. You really know how to rock this place. What can I say except this is utterly outstanding.    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Bill, Larry and the rest of them before me said exactly what I was thinking....go for it!! Life is all about risks and taking chances...maybe she is waiting for you to make the first move...please....then, let us know!! ~Hugs, Nancy~ *~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~* |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
To all - H'mmmmmmmmm/ thank you for your words... |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
"but do I dare tell you, how I feel… I mean really, what should I do, it’s something, I don’t want to conceal…" ...and if you never say ...how will you ever know ...if she will ...go or stay? ...and in it's offer sweet ...may be the start ...where two souls meet |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Carpe diem...sieze the day…introduce yourself...I add my vote to the rest. Jamie said it best, a yes is always worth the risk of a no. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Ok BC got that guitar song in your head, so you might as well go for it... and stop all that thinking.  btw~ enjoyed the read. Deb |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Maybe she feels the same way about you...and wishes you would approach her...maybe you can give her a poem ~Victoria~ "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides." |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Enjoy |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Just trot right up to her and get acquainted Her loss if she demures! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
just thinking, but don't think to long...it's better to start talking...and well who knows *s* ((hugs)) Charisma |
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