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vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

0 posted 2002-01-09 05:11 AM

Nothing To Sneeze At

I think I'm allergic to writing
Sounds silly but it's true
I started to write this poem
but before I could finish...ah..ah...choo!

I suddenly started sneezing
And not just one or two
I'm having an all out sneezing fit
and it's driving me...ah...ah...choo!

Crazy as it sounds, my friends
I'm unable to subdue
This strange allergic reaction
To penning a poem for...ah...ah...choo!

You probably don't believe me
And that leaves me feeling blue
Now I must go get a kleenex
So, I bid you all...ah...ah...choo!...adieu

~vlraynes

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2002-01-09 06:18 AM

Big, big smiles for this delightful piece Vicky!!! I enjoyed this tremendously, wonderfully creative!

Best wishes,
/Kit

2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

2 posted 2002-01-09 08:40 AM

Th Th Th ank ank ank yooooou.

Melton

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

3 posted 2002-01-09 04:54 PM

*cheers*......glad that sneezing dont stop you from writing, even if the sounds of ah ah choo echos in every line....

thanks for sharing.

Charisma

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-01-09 05:21 PM

(sigh) Sooooooooo cute and creative, sweet friend, I know just how you feel; I too have to sneeze every time I stop to think of what my next thought will be! (kiss on cheek) Soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your words are always a delight to read, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vicky, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

5 posted 2002-01-09 05:26 PM

This brought a smile to my face today, thank you.......

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

heather_kitn
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since 2001-12-07

Posts 61
In The Kokapelli's Song

6 posted 2002-01-09 06:21 PM

-heather

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

7 posted 2002-01-09 06:36 PM

God bless you ..ha..cute one Vicky..very creative..hugss..

~Victoria~

"To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides."
~ David Viscott

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

8 posted 2002-01-09 06:43 PM

HAHAHA very clever, now you got me sneezing.. great clever poem. floria

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2002-01-09 06:52 PM

Vicky, very cute and quite clever!
Enjoyed and thanks for the chuckle today!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

10 posted 2002-01-09 07:34 PM

Bless you Vicky, this is so cute.

copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

11 posted 2002-01-09 09:17 PM

Ha Ha, this is so cute. Do you have that bad cold like I do?? Pretty good to make a poem out of over sneezing.

Sandra

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

12 posted 2002-01-10 12:16 PM

hey!! this is toooo cute! true to life, is it? hope youre not feeling allergic for long!

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"and even when we're apart, you beat around in my heart..." -lonestar

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

13 posted 2002-01-10 12:41 PM

Vicky,
What complete and utter fun. Bless you. No...really, bless you. Ahh, you spent your limit. But bless you anyway!

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

14 posted 2002-01-10 11:36 AM

Give me back those Kleenex
I have the greater need!
You sneeze when you write poetry?
Well I sneeze when I breathe!

LOL... I enjoyed this very much, Vicky... Get a prescription for claritin and write on! *S*

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

15 posted 2002-01-10 11:40 AM

LittleBuddy~
Me no gots a 'Sneezy' muse ...
but now I know where to get one~
Tee-Hee .... it's sooooooooooooooooooo good to see you 'inspired'~
Love ya' to pieces ... and then some~
*Hugs*
~*Me*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

16 posted 2002-01-10 11:41 AM

Dear Vicky,
Gesundheit! Loved it!

Nan

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

17 posted 2002-01-10 12:43 PM

dont kiss your honey when your nose is runny..you may think its funny, but itsnot

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"and even when we're apart, you beat around in my heart..." -lonestar

LngJhnAg
Member Elite

since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

18 posted 2002-01-10 12:46 PM

Vicky - a tricky little poem you've written here. I enjoyed it very much.

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