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amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

0 posted 2002-01-08 12:52 PM

Oblique, the musty rains
That slant between, and delve beneath-
To purify, the obsequious soul
Oh what, to what do they bequeath?

Amazed, in roughshod countenance
That sails along, I begin to fade-
To abrogat, this unholy warp
For what, to what do they trade?

Irresolute, the withered rains
That feed among, and play within
To oversee, the lingering moraine
So what, to what do they begin?

Vacuous, in resurgent canvas
That wakes upon, I start to emerge-
To pervade, this quiescent palette
From where, to where comes the next urge?

Just believe...

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

1 posted 2002-01-08 12:55 PM

Beautifully written, Amusemi. It has a mysterious and mystical feel to it.
Great job.

copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2002-01-08 01:16 PM

I was moved by this, and I really can't put my finger on it.
But it moved me.

Kathleen--
Neither genius, fame, nor love show the greatness of the soul.
Only kindness can do that. ~Jean Baptiste Henri Lacordaire~

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2002-01-08 02:51 PM

Amusemi,
That's what lifes all about. Enjoyed

wolf
Junior Member

since 2002-01-04

Posts 10
Hamilton (Steeltown)

4 posted 2002-01-08 03:00 PM

Lots of thought in this poem. Well written, vey polished.
A Poets poem!
(did you mean abrogate ?)

it's the soul afraid of dying , that never learns to live.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-01-08 03:05 PM

(sigh) Soooooooo mystical and beautiful, sweet friend, this too had a very special and invigorating feel to me, like pervading serenity and filling the heart and soul with peace and sensation! (big hugggssssss) I love it, sweet friend, your words always have such emotional feeling and beauty! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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