Will You Remember Me? Rewrite

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Open Poetry #18

Will You Remember Me? Rewrite

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2002-01-08 11:14 AM

Will you remember me?
After you leave me,
Will you remember me?
How sweet and tenderly,
Will you be thinking of me?
Will you miss me so?
When the night is there,
Will you remember me?
Will you be taking
someone's else
hand?
when Iam not there with you
Will you take my heart?
Will I be still yours?
Will you be loving
someonelse?
Will you be the one
to holding on?
When the time is so right,
Will you remember me?
I know,
you will be leaving
tonight,
After tonight wil be gone,
Will you be thinking of me?
You will be miles away from me
and if you will be thinking
of me,
Then you can
write few words
on your book ,
And tell me
how you are remembering me?
And the love we knew
You can take a look
at yourself and say the words
will you remember me?

[This message has been edited by vandana (01-08-2002 11:19 AM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-01-08 11:44 AM

(sigh) So sad but beautiful, sweet friend, I pray now that love is close to your heart and can never be forgotten of the joy and happiness your heart shines with! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are soooooo romantic! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

2 posted 2002-01-08 12:01 PM

Great expression of loss and grief in this piece!! Good job.

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