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Open Poetry #18

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Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

0 posted 2002-01-08 12:10 PM

'Mid sleepless heat of summer's night,
No breezes call, alone I keep,
My solitude as lay contrite,
Coverless in tearless weep,
Nameless feelings fueling grief,
Benumbed to pain, to night's refrain,
Burning, yearning, sans relief,
Disconsolate, repine's disdain,
Amid night's swelter, perspired, bemired,
Alone I keep, am tired, am tired.

[This message has been edited by Tim (01-08-2002 12:20 AM).]

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2002-01-08 12:12 PM

"'Mid sleepless heat of summer's night,
No breezes call, alone I keep,
My solitude as lay contrite,
Coverless in tearless weep,
Nameless feelings fueling grief,"

wow, the images you create, so sad and alone....a powerful emotional pull with this

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

2 posted 2002-01-08 12:13 PM

*sigh* musings from a tender and tired heart. I felt this poem. You have put it together perfectly but mostly I feel myself responding to the feelings in it. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Ocelot
Junior Member

since 2002-01-07

Posts 40
Texas

3 posted 2002-01-08 12:29 PM

My Gosh Tim, so heart tugging and felt. You displayed your feelings exceedingly well. Kudos,

+| ... Ocelot ... |+

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

4 posted 2002-01-08 12:38 PM

fine treatise on those hot sleepless nights

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