Open Poetry #18 |
Day Long Hands - Dedicated to Mysteria |
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Day Long Hands Long and hard came the reflections in-between, The up and down of the day, Soft and smooth should have been the flow of loving thoughts ~ But! Short and swift were the moments, interludes of time ~ breathless ~ Left her breathless, they came too fast, left too quick, myriad thoughts of pain Pain hurts Absent from body but renders a mind useless Never seen but words touched, then the heart broke Pain hurts what does care look like feel like? I would put a stamp on care and send it direct, Bypassing hands Straight to your heart If it would take the pain away from you If I could I would… Long and hard this day has been long and hard and difficult of dream Distant on the wind of keen I heard long the scream of scoria ~ suffering ~ seeking out the next victim I went to see, to hear, to hold, to quietly listen, All that I could offer Was a helping hand from Open #12 01.10.01 revised 01.07.02 [This message has been edited by Sunshine (01-07-2002 11:04 PM).] |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Okay, I give up - I'll never grow up and write like you because you just keep growing and growing... Loved it jimmy |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Karilea, this is so so sad, I too know her tears so well, but with such a loving heart like yours, you will always stamp compassion on hearts messages, and she will always cheer up to you, for you will always be her sunshine, as you are to us all! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, Sharon is a very loving person just as you are, she will cherish this forever and will always be so lucky to have such Sunshine in her heart! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is so gentle and smiles with friendship very nice |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Karilea...and so nice to dedicate it to Sharon..... ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!!!A perfect dedication....It fits her to a T and I absolutely love it. Very well done. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
And what could be more welcome than a helping hand? I missed this one and it slipped by these busy hands, thank you sweet friend of mine. ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, For this a |
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