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brianbeaudry
Member

since 2001-07-20

Posts 410
Northern Ontario Canada

0 posted 2002-01-07 10:06 PM

Agony and Ecstasy

I look at you in gentle sleep
My love I cannot measure
Such sweet ecstasy I reap
In this heart I truly treasure
Each gentle breath I await
In the rising of your breast
Then gaze again in its abate
Soft contours of your chest
Calmest beauty of your face
My fingers trace your lips
Stores of past soft embrace
As my lips did yours eclipse
It’s agony to love this much
Your beauty deals me pain
After even the briefest touch
My heart aches for it again
I couldn’t live without you
Anguish would be too great
The ecstasy of love’s accrue
The agony loss would create

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-01-07 10:17 PM

(sigh) Sooooooo beautifully bittersweet, dearest friend, I know just how you feel and I feel we can all fear that this love will last. (big hugggsssssss) Always believe in yourself and hold your dreams close, and your love will always shine in your heart with joy! You deserve the greatest felicity, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brian, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-01-07 10:19 PM

My Oh My! Oh Brian, things may be mighty cold outside up north, but your writing is very warm indeed. Beautifully penned poet sir.
P.S. I was going to offer you some hot chocolate, but, it doesn't sound as though you need any.

~Warm hugs from Southern Ontario, Nancy~

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

Hypnosis
Member

since 2001-12-02

Posts 325
CO

3 posted 2002-01-07 10:59 PM

So many heartfelt emotions in this piece. You write so beautifully Brian. I have the same feeling as you describe here. You must have a lucky love there, because you have such a sweet and beautiful heart. Great job.

Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

4 posted 2002-01-07 11:51 PM

BRAVO!!!!Oh Brian....you know just how much I love it when you write of your love this way.....Absolutely stunning. Sensually romantic...*giggling* I want a love like this too...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

5 posted 2002-01-08 12:12 PM

It’s agony to love this much
Your beauty deals me pain
After even the briefest touch
My heart aches for it again
I couldn’t live without you
Anguish would be too great
The ecstasy of love’s accrue
The agony loss would create

I've lived this love and you have written it perfectly.

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

6 posted 2002-01-09 03:38 AM

Brian-
   Wow...this is really beautifully done.
   You've done an excellent job of capturing
   both the agony and the ecstacy in this piece.
   Wonderful!
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (01-09-2002 03:39 AM).]

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