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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-01-07 09:04 PM



Did I Hear …

~*Marge Tindal*~

Did I hear, "I love you"
in the still of the night ?
And did I hear it linger
until dawn made first light ?

In wake of the morn
as you spoke my name
I'm sure I heard "I love you"
in gentle refrain~

I heard your voice in whisper-speak
"Come with me into this morn"
Softly spoken in love tones
of soft radiant adorn~

Come and let me hold you
when the sun has lost it's light
'Foreverly' sweet darling …
in the twi-of-light~

Keeping the love alive
in shadowing of the dark
As on this flight of loving night
we tenderly embark~

In this full-circle of loving ...
that we have come to know
'Foreverly' I will love you
and always tell you so~


~*Marge and Bill*~
January 2002


*Photo Courtesy - Matt Allgood
Allgood's Little New Orleans Restaurant
Historic Downtown-DeLand, Florida


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2002 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
SmartChick
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1 posted 2002-01-07 09:09 PM


Oh Marge, this is beautiful. Love is a wonderful thing, isn't it?
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2 posted 2002-01-07 09:23 PM


Margie girl darling sister of my soul, I really love this poem it is UTTERLY utterly fabulous.

It is just aglow with love, and you and Bill shine with it. As I've mentioned before darling girl love suits you You wear it very well. And I can see Bill loves you just as much as you deserve to be loved.

Wonderful writing and I love you foreverly too. Shine on Margie moon girl


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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3 posted 2002-01-07 09:26 PM


OH YESSSS.....beautiful..and your faces
reflect your very words....Thanx Marge
for giving us this...

Elizabeth Santos
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4 posted 2002-01-07 09:27 PM


Congratulations Marge on your engagement
I am so happy for both of you
Boy, now are we ever going to hear the love poems! Keep them coming.
Im loved this poem
Liz

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5 posted 2002-01-07 09:27 PM


Marge,
Your happiness makes you glow
Did I forget to tell you so?
Sy

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6 posted 2002-01-07 09:33 PM


Your love blooms and shows in this fantabulous work of art. Savor every moment of every night and dawn. Love looks good on you.... You make a good looking couple. Stay Happy... Love and peace Maggie ((~.~))


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7 posted 2002-01-07 09:33 PM


Marge and Bill...how rare a gift is a love like yours.  But to be able to write about with such passion and skill is the rarest gift of all.   ***Ivy Rose
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8 posted 2002-01-07 09:35 PM


Just a lovely picture and congratulations again to you both on your engagement.  You both look so happy and in love.  

~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~

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9 posted 2002-01-07 09:36 PM


you shimmer Marge.....this is lovely
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10 posted 2002-01-07 10:01 PM


Ahhhh!!! Marge this is awesome!!  Hey, this Bill is one handsome dude too, eh?  You both are just glowing with love....wonderful!
Congrats again to you both and hugs, Nancy.

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

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11 posted 2002-01-07 10:11 PM


Oh Marge, your face is just glowing with love and the poem brought this face a smile and tears all at the same time. God love you girlfriend; I am just so happy for you and Bill. Hugs, Marti
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12 posted 2002-01-07 10:12 PM


Awwww shucks, guys...just awesome that you have so much!!

jwesley

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13 posted 2002-01-07 10:30 PM


lovely pic Marge..you look verrry happy..glowing is more like it ha..

               ~Vic

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14 posted 2002-01-07 10:33 PM


WOW...you do look so happy....aint it grand??  Hugs to you....


Lauren~

Tomorrow's another day
and I'm thirsty any way
so bring on the rain

Marge Tindal
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15 posted 2002-01-07 10:42 PM


***Friends~
You all are SO kind to me~
Bill and I thank you so very, very much~

That fella you see with me is one sweet, adorable hunk~
Me wuv him very much~
And he knows he's got lots of eyes watching our love grow~

You all are just the bestest there is ~
Thank you all from the 'heart of my little bottom'~

*My friend, Marti, is new to the site ... Tee-Hee ... she forgot who she is, but let's welcome her anyhow~
WELCOME MARTI (new member ID is NewEnglandlazurlu)
... I love you, gal~
Fix that 'Cookie-Jar'

*Love n' hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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16 posted 2002-01-07 10:49 PM


Did I hear, "I love you"
in the still of the night ?
And did I hear it linger
until dawn made first light ?

In wake of the morn
as you spoke my name
I'm sure I heard "I love you"
in gentle refrain~
====================================

Margie girl..this is a loveswept moment of inspire and a lovely poem...
and its a IWIHWT too!!
you and your "foreverly" muse make for magic poetry...
we love ya in love girlie

Yes I've changed ...
so why couldnt you given all we've been thru,
could I still blow your mind ... leave you breathless.

~TS~

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17 posted 2002-01-07 11:22 PM


Marge...

I'm so glad you and Bill are happy, and it shines through in all you say! Congratulations, not only on your engagement, but on all the wonderful things you've been writing to share with us (and to email to me!! )

Bec

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
-Winnie-the-Pooh

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18 posted 2002-01-07 11:29 PM


Oh Marge your eyes sparkle with the light of love.....*sigh* I just love the fact you are in love and to such a great looking man too...good job, girl...hold him tight and fill his life with all the passion your heart has. Congradulations to you both....Keep writing about it because I love to read of your joy and happiness. **big big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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19 posted 2002-01-08 02:09 AM


Hey Marge are you listening
The picture and words  
were from two hearts  glistening
Congrats my friend
Hope

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20 posted 2002-01-08 02:14 AM


Oh I see.. you outshine the moon

Lovely poetry.. and so r u

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
   Percy Bysshe Shelley

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21 posted 2002-01-08 02:18 AM


This one is so wonderful.  I feel so good right now and it is all because of your poem.  Thank you,  Kudos!

+| ... Ocelot ... |+

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22 posted 2002-01-08 05:55 AM


Marge - the poem and the photo is fabulous. Congratulations to you and he...

BC

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23 posted 2002-01-08 07:15 AM


oh margie..how good love looks on you...
amazing isnt it..how big such small words can be..oh how they can take the breath away...

keep loving...
hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"and even when we're apart, you beat around in my heart..."  -lonestar

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24 posted 2002-01-08 07:23 AM


Beautiful Marge, and your face reflects the love completely!

*Big Hugs*
Deb

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25 posted 2002-01-08 07:25 AM


Marge,
another foreverly loverly write. Congratulations!
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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26 posted 2002-01-08 10:34 AM


Margie dear - this is all so beautiful and lovely....i can see the glow...i'm so happy for you...good luck....

hugs,
amigo

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27 posted 2002-01-08 11:07 AM


Congrats on a great poem, Marge, and a great looking catch.  I think Bill and I may have met at a recent Kitty-Kicker National Convention held in your neck of the woods.  I may be mistaken, but I think Bill gave a seminar on the differences between kicking kitties into the wind versus with the wind.  I didn't catch everything he said.  Is there any chance he could send me a copy of his presentation?  heh
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28 posted 2002-01-09 10:01 AM


Beautiful poem... even more beautiful faces of love. *S* I'm so glad for you! *S*

LJA: You behave yourself! LOL We know you know love... and know Lor doesn't leave you much time for kitty-kicking! LOL

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29 posted 2002-01-09 11:34 AM


JanetMarie~
Awwwww ... you melt me little heart with such a sweet reply~

Bec~
You're a doll ... and I love sharing with you and your mom~
Thank you~

StarTime~
Thank you, sweetie~
I'm sooooooo happy I just HAVE to write it~

Hope~
Thanks so much sweet lady~

PepperMint~
Oh ... thank you very much~

Ocelot~
To know I may have caused someone to 'feel so good'
is the nicest compliment one could receive~
Thank you~

BillCharles~
Thank you, my friend~

DG~
Yeahhhhhh !  Those 'small words' do it everytime~
Thank you, sweetie~

BloomingRose~
Thank you, hon~

Kethry~
That 'foreverly' just likes my pen~
Thank you for the sweet reply~

Amigo~
I appreciate your well-wishes~
AND thank you sooooo much for the lovely penning of the beautiful sentiments you expressed in your poem for Bill and I~

LongJohn~
Tee-Hee ... 'Coach Bill' says "Seminar copies in the mail"
Now you take SuthernGal's advice and 'behave yourself'~

SuthernGal~
Thank you for the heartfelt wishes, sweetie~
I love ya'
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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30 posted 2002-01-09 03:47 PM


Isn't love the most wonderful feeling, so good to see how you both are glowing.

((hugs))
Charisma

~*Theresia~*  

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31 posted 2002-01-09 04:51 PM


Marge, I am so happy for you and Bill. Every time I see one of your poems for him it makes me smile so much. The love in each one outshines everything else.
Dee

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32 posted 2002-01-09 07:01 PM


Congratulations Marge, this was wonderful and you both look so happy. floria
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33 posted 2002-01-09 07:10 PM


Beautiful picture...beautiful poem...beautiful couple, who look very much in love.
The glow shows on both of your faces.
Congratulations.

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34 posted 2002-01-09 07:12 PM


Very touching heart felt poem.  I can tell this is personal and while the style seems a little rough to me, the message is very powerful.
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35 posted 2002-01-09 07:57 PM



I love Bill already for making you so happy

Sweet kisses to both

Titia

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36 posted 2002-01-09 08:21 PM


Hi Marge,

Well how love looks SOOooo very lovely on the both of you, what an awesome write and so full of beauty, I am so very happy for you my friend and I wish you both only the very best.

Love, Cerenity

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We have to be reminded that He exist!"

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37 posted 2002-01-09 09:00 PM


AWWWWE!  This is awesome!  It's so neat to see two people so in love! Congrats dear poet friend! I'm so happy for you!  I love this! as I'm sure Bill does too!
Hugs
Cindi

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38 posted 2002-01-09 09:22 PM


Hello Marge
This was nothing short of stunning! I could see the love and feel how happy you were when you wrote this.  May love and happiness fill your world always.  Take care......Sue

Suetang

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39 posted 2002-01-10 10:44 AM


Charisma~
Thanks gal ... we are really enjoying our happiness~

Dee~
Awwwwww ... thank you dear~

Strbbux~
Thank you so much~

Lyra~
I really appreciate your reply~

Canuckster~
Hmmmmmmm ...
I write it straight from the heart ...
THAT'S MY STYLE~

Titia~
Awwwwwwwwwwww ~  How sweet you are dearest friend~
He'll like that~

Cerenity~
Thank you VERY much, my friend~

Cindi~
Thanks gal~
Yeah ... he does like it too~

SueTang~
Thank you for coming in with sweet well-wishes~

***Bill and I appreciate the well-wishes from the circle of friendship~
*Hugs*
~*Marge & Bill*~



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40 posted 2002-01-10 02:04 PM


My heart sis is happy..Your words ring with the magic of love..What a beautiful picture of you and your Bill.  
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42 posted 2002-01-10 03:39 PM


So, that's the white knight that won the hand of the fair maid, Marge
I wish you loving bliss for eternity.

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43 posted 2002-01-15 09:20 PM


Martie~
Thank you sweet sister~

Walt~
*winking* right back at you, sweetie~

InterLoper~
Yes ... he's the ONE~
Thank you for the well-wishes, my friend~

*Hugs* to all~
~*Marge n' Bill*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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44 posted 2005-02-11 07:36 PM


~Because some moments are just sooooooo treasured~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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