Open Poetry #18 |
Did I Hear ... |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Did I Hear … ~*Marge Tindal*~ Did I hear, "I love you" in the still of the night ? And did I hear it linger until dawn made first light ? In wake of the morn as you spoke my name I'm sure I heard "I love you" in gentle refrain~ I heard your voice in whisper-speak "Come with me into this morn" Softly spoken in love tones of soft radiant adorn~ Come and let me hold you when the sun has lost it's light 'Foreverly' sweet darling … in the twi-of-light~ Keeping the love alive in shadowing of the dark As on this flight of loving night we tenderly embark~ In this full-circle of loving ... that we have come to know 'Foreverly' I will love you and always tell you so~ ~*Marge and Bill*~ January 2002 *Photo Courtesy - Matt Allgood Allgood's Little New Orleans Restaurant Historic Downtown-DeLand, Florida ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Oh Marge, this is beautiful. Love is a wonderful thing, isn't it? |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl darling sister of my soul, I really love this poem it is UTTERLY utterly fabulous. It is just aglow with love, and you and Bill shine with it. As I've mentioned before darling girl love suits you You wear it very well. And I can see Bill loves you just as much as you deserve to be loved. Wonderful writing and I love you foreverly too. Shine on Margie moon girl Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
OH YESSSS.....beautiful..and your faces reflect your very words....Thanx Marge for giving us this... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Congratulations Marge on your engagement I am so happy for both of you Boy, now are we ever going to hear the love poems! Keep them coming. Im loved this poem Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Your happiness makes you glow Did I forget to tell you so? Sy |
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Flutterwings Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 288Maine |
Your love blooms and shows in this fantabulous work of art. Savor every moment of every night and dawn. Love looks good on you.... You make a good looking couple. Stay Happy... Love and peace Maggie ((~.~)) |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Marge and Bill...how rare a gift is a love like yours. But to be able to write about with such passion and skill is the rarest gift of all. ***Ivy Rose |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Just a lovely picture and congratulations again to you both on your engagement. You both look so happy and in love. ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
you shimmer Marge.....this is lovely |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ahhhh!!! Marge this is awesome!! Hey, this Bill is one handsome dude too, eh? You both are just glowing with love....wonderful! Congrats again to you both and hugs, Nancy. ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh Marge, your face is just glowing with love and the poem brought this face a smile and tears all at the same time. God love you girlfriend; I am just so happy for you and Bill. Hugs, Marti |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Awwww shucks, guys...just awesome that you have so much!! jwesley |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
lovely pic Marge..you look verrry happy..glowing is more like it ha.. ~Vic |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
WOW...you do look so happy....aint it grand?? Hugs to you.... Lauren~ Tomorrow's another day |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
***Friends~ You all are SO kind to me~ Bill and I thank you so very, very much~ That fella you see with me is one sweet, adorable hunk~ Me wuv him very much~ And he knows he's got lots of eyes watching our love grow~ You all are just the bestest there is ~ Thank you all from the 'heart of my little bottom'~ *My friend, Marti, is new to the site ... Tee-Hee ... she forgot who she is, but let's welcome her anyhow~ WELCOME MARTI (new member ID is NewEnglandlazurlu) ... I love you, gal~ Fix that 'Cookie-Jar' *Love n' hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Did I hear, "I love you" in the still of the night ? And did I hear it linger until dawn made first light ? In wake of the morn as you spoke my name I'm sure I heard "I love you" in gentle refrain~ ==================================== Margie girl..this is a loveswept moment of inspire and a lovely poem... and its a IWIHWT too!! you and your "foreverly" muse make for magic poetry... we love ya in love girlie Yes I've changed ... |
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Bec Member
since 2001-02-23
Posts 475Canberra |
Marge... I'm so glad you and Bill are happy, and it shines through in all you say! Congratulations, not only on your engagement, but on all the wonderful things you've been writing to share with us (and to email to me!! ) Bec "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. And all you can do is to go where they can find you." |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh Marge your eyes sparkle with the light of love.....*sigh* I just love the fact you are in love and to such a great looking man too...good job, girl...hold him tight and fill his life with all the passion your heart has. Congradulations to you both....Keep writing about it because I love to read of your joy and happiness. **big big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Hey Marge are you listening The picture and words were from two hearts glistening Congrats my friend Hope |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Oh I see.. you outshine the moon Lovely poetry.. and so r u Pepper |
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Ocelot Junior Member
since 2002-01-07
Posts 40Texas |
This one is so wonderful. I feel so good right now and it is all because of your poem. Thank you, Kudos! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Marge - the poem and the photo is fabulous. Congratulations to you and he... BC |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
oh margie..how good love looks on you... amazing isnt it..how big such small words can be..oh how they can take the breath away... keep loving... hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Beautiful Marge, and your face reflects the love completely! *Big Hugs* Deb |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marge, another foreverly loverly write. Congratulations! Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
Margie dear - this is all so beautiful and lovely....i can see the glow...i'm so happy for you...good luck.... hugs, amigo |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Congrats on a great poem, Marge, and a great looking catch. I think Bill and I may have met at a recent Kitty-Kicker National Convention held in your neck of the woods. I may be mistaken, but I think Bill gave a seminar on the differences between kicking kitties into the wind versus with the wind. I didn't catch everything he said. Is there any chance he could send me a copy of his presentation? heh |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beautiful poem... even more beautiful faces of love. *S* I'm so glad for you! *S* LJA: You behave yourself! LOL We know you know love... and know Lor doesn't leave you much time for kitty-kicking! LOL |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JanetMarie~ Awwwww ... you melt me little heart with such a sweet reply~ Bec~ You're a doll ... and I love sharing with you and your mom~ Thank you~ StarTime~ Thank you, sweetie~ I'm sooooooo happy I just HAVE to write it~ Hope~ Thanks so much sweet lady~ PepperMint~ Oh ... thank you very much~ Ocelot~ To know I may have caused someone to 'feel so good' is the nicest compliment one could receive~ Thank you~ BillCharles~ Thank you, my friend~ DG~ Yeahhhhhh ! Those 'small words' do it everytime~ Thank you, sweetie~ BloomingRose~ Thank you, hon~ Kethry~ That 'foreverly' just likes my pen~ Thank you for the sweet reply~ Amigo~ I appreciate your well-wishes~ AND thank you sooooo much for the lovely penning of the beautiful sentiments you expressed in your poem for Bill and I~ LongJohn~ Tee-Hee ... 'Coach Bill' says "Seminar copies in the mail" Now you take SuthernGal's advice and 'behave yourself'~ SuthernGal~ Thank you for the heartfelt wishes, sweetie~ I love ya' *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Isn't love the most wonderful feeling, so good to see how you both are glowing. ((hugs)) Charisma ~*Theresia~* |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Marge, I am so happy for you and Bill. Every time I see one of your poems for him it makes me smile so much. The love in each one outshines everything else. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Congratulations Marge, this was wonderful and you both look so happy. floria |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Beautiful picture...beautiful poem...beautiful couple, who look very much in love. The glow shows on both of your faces. Congratulations. copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Canuckster Member
since 2002-01-09
Posts 285New Mexico, USA |
Very touching heart felt poem. I can tell this is personal and while the style seems a little rough to me, the message is very powerful. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
I love Bill already for making you so happy Sweet kisses to both Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Marge, Well how love looks SOOooo very lovely on the both of you, what an awesome write and so full of beauty, I am so very happy for you my friend and I wish you both only the very best. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
AWWWWE! This is awesome! It's so neat to see two people so in love! Congrats dear poet friend! I'm so happy for you! I love this! as I'm sure Bill does too! Hugs Cindi |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Marge This was nothing short of stunning! I could see the love and feel how happy you were when you wrote this. May love and happiness fill your world always. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ Thanks gal ... we are really enjoying our happiness~ Dee~ Awwwwww ... thank you dear~ Strbbux~ Thank you so much~ Lyra~ I really appreciate your reply~ Canuckster~ Hmmmmmmm ... I write it straight from the heart ... THAT'S MY STYLE~ Titia~ Awwwwwwwwwwww ~ How sweet you are dearest friend~ He'll like that~ Cerenity~ Thank you VERY much, my friend~ Cindi~ Thanks gal~ Yeah ... he does like it too~ SueTang~ Thank you for coming in with sweet well-wishes~ ***Bill and I appreciate the well-wishes from the circle of friendship~ *Hugs* ~*Marge & Bill*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
My heart sis is happy..Your words ring with the magic of love..What a beautiful picture of you and your Bill. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
peekaboo |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
So, that's the white knight that won the hand of the fair maid, Marge I wish you loving bliss for eternity. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ Thank you sweet sister~ Walt~ *winking* right back at you, sweetie~ InterLoper~ Yes ... he's the ONE~ Thank you for the well-wishes, my friend~ *Hugs* to all~ ~*Marge n' Bill*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
~Because some moments are just sooooooo treasured~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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