Open Poetry #18 |
Where Am I? |
Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Where Am I? There is a an extraordinary place unfamiliar to many, when chance allows, I visit; a garden alive with colors felt rather than seen, hues beyond childhood kaleidoscopes, where auroras curiously blend with enigmatic shades of obsidian. Unlike the pragmatic world, it can only be viewed viscerally. Others make this journey too, in smoky wisps of linking thought, touching one another with abstract fingers, each with their own imprint pressed into tidal sands, leaving behind gifts of rapture. © 2002 Corinne Bailey [This message has been edited by Corinne (01-07-2002 08:12 PM).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh yes......I know that place...I too go there to fill my soul with the peace and beauty only it can provide...mine is on an island retreat. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This poem is ....sterling. Kathleen-- |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, we all have this special place, this is beautiful! Let us all find this piece of solace deep in our hearts and touch hope and rapture! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Corrine, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Deary, deary...I've woke up several mornings asking this very question?????....How are ya gal...Happy New Year...hope you have a healthy properous poetic new year gal...Toe |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you Startime, glad you also know this place! Thanks, Kathleen! You're sweet, Noah! Toe, Toe, Toe, always the jokester! Good to see you - hope you are well! Cor |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
That would be the local Irish Pub.... after a few pints of Kilkenny things get really colourful. Park |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Corrinne - perhaps in this lovely write, is where I am... BC |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Just how I feel about passions. Wonderful write. Sandra |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Corinne, I don't think you could have expressed this any better..your choice of words is remarkable.. |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
VERY, VERY Nice!!!! Enjoyed this poem very much. Makes me think of the dwelling place of the Spirit...the heart filled with faith. ***Ivy |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ I have a place ... a special place that sounds 'almost' as lovely as the place you've written~ I retreat to the meadow ... and languish in the serene beauty there~ This is just perfect to me, gal~ Ya' done real good ... ~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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