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Misty Kiss
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Misty Kiss |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Out of the early morning mists~~~~ She steps into the verbena of precious dawn, white swirls of vapor caressing her, enfolding her in a sensuous embrace. Her eyes staring into the heart ~~~~~~As she seduces, cross-steps around the soul. "Awaken, O' Dreamer," she whispers Let desire flame within you." And, she circles the mouth with a misty kiss. Awakening those unheard of dreams, those mystical spirit responses. A fever brewing down deep ~~~~~~in the soul's recesses. The early morning mists filling the unknown with a deeper knowing, a deeper searching of the beauty so eagerly presented...in the dawn. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Soooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, such sensual spirituality of loves magic fills these words! (smiles) May she wake to see love open before her eyes at dawns light in a mystical misty kiss of pure love! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-07-2002 07:01 PM).] |
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Ocelot Junior Member
since 2002-01-07
Posts 40Texas |
Very sweet and clever...wording and the creation of a magical and "misty" atmosphere makes this fantastic. Kudos to you! +| ... Ocelot ... |+ |
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Ladyhawke Member
since 2001-09-01
Posts 86 |
Your poem evokes a feeling of the ethereal. It makes me think of an eary summer morning next to a lake, or fog rolling in from the ocean (though I have never been there). |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
How absolutely first rate is this, Ethreal and misty utterly utterly magical I really do love it    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful and enchanting write! Enjoyed this thoroughly, also the presentation. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Felt I was there, my friend...watching, enjoying... jwesley |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
such a romantic moment you have created*sighs* -------------- |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
What a lovely kiss to wake up to! Kathleen-- |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
"And, she circles the mouth with a misty kiss." --what a beautiful image, Ivy. A sweet, romantic piece, I enjoyed this greatly. *Krista Knutson* |
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