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Not worth crying over
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Not worth crying over |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida 
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You no longer want to be my man Watching you walk away, my heartache began I asked if we could be friends but you said it wouldn't make sense With that you turned your back You look at me with eyes of coal jet black Now I'm freezing from the cold shoulder I guess you meant it when you said it was over A goodbye kiss is my final wish You just stand there not returning the kiss Begrudging me of once more bliss Nothing I do or say will work You're the strong one, leaving me the hurt The mirror of me shatters all over the floor The crunching of your shoes fills the air As you head for the door It is so like you to make a mess I'm wallowing in depression, you could care less I'm subjected to your sudden rath Crying over you, soaking in my eyes bath I see now, those tears should have been saved Your not worth crying over for countless days |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) Such pain and sorrow fills thes ewords, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I pray with all my heart that very soon trust and faith in love will heal these memories! (kiss on lips) I love you, sweet friend, I'm always here when you need someone to talk to, just as so many others here are very happy to! You will always be my Guinevere, sweet Joanna! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, my love, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
it's his loss, hon. ((((((((((hug)))))))))) Kathleen-- |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
I agree with Irish rose, it is his loss. cant say more than that, good write. floria |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
RP darling girl yes you're right not worth crying over but ohhhh doesn't it hurt when it happens I wrote you this............ don't suppose it will help but it does remind us not to forget the lesson I’ll Never Forget I’ll never forget you I couldn’t, wouldn’t try Because I learnt from you how a soul can die I learnt that love can feel good but cut deep I learnt from you that dreams belong to sleep I should have called a halt to what we had As soon I saw our love turning bad The apple of love was rotten to the core And it left me with a wound deep and sore I wouldn’t forget you I shouldn’t want to Because I learnt the way a soul is untrue I discovered how faith could blind my eyes And make me deaf to fears or hopeless sighs How I believed that if I gave a little bit more I’d be able to pick my heart off the floor I kept on hoping that something would be But found nothing changed unfortunately I’ll not forget this I’ll need to remember you Because I learnt that a heart can turn blue I learnt of the way some souls break apart And how others can torture and punish a heart I need to recall just how this came to be How I was broken and cried piteously I’m not going back to that pit of despair So I need to remember how you put me there Marsha And darling girl your writing is as wonderful as you are. This is absolutely full of heart, I can feel the pain you felt. Fly on sister phoenix fly on    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Sadly you were hurt, but you are also right that the hurt is not worth hanging on to. Just keep your eyes straight ahead and don't look back. There's always something good on the other side of sorrow. Hugs, Deb |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
I'm so happy that you got it right To see you in tears is not a good sight.... Nice write, Joanna...Cheer up....  |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Great attitude.....Great poem, Joanna.... I loved it, but feel bad for you.... Things will look up soon... Please put a 'w' on the front of wrath....and don't cry anymore, He really isn't worth it. I am sending you some hugs.  copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Joanna, you are such a beautiful, kind and loving person...any man should treat you like a treasure! Cheer up...one day the right one will come along. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
Oh Joanna, such a sad poem from you makes us all sad. I hope you are soon in better spirits with your true love in joyfulness. I could not think of one who could do something like this to you, you are just so sweet. From your friend Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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