Open Poetry #18 |
Repost of Farewell Auld Lang Syne | > |
VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Farewell, Auld Lang Syne gently large, white flakes fall from a gray-white sky sprinkling fairy-dust as the minutes go by coating the land with a layer of white washing from view remnants of dust, rust, autumn’s crust chill seeps through the glass as yellow dog investigates the grass licking, sniffing, tip-toeing with his paws pauses a moment as if frozen in time then lays a big one there in the rime and I taken aback with my lack of premonition as I suffer the day in a pondering condition contemplating the passing of the final hours of the year when the night will bend and fold away the past then commence the new of two-thousand-two somewhere the stars twinkle a farewell to contrived hours, days, months and the year as we give way to hope edged with a tiny bit of fear what will it hold, this new one ahead, dare we plan for no tragedies, dare we hope for no dread dare we cling to a tiny thread of expectation, of promise, that wherever we are brought He is there and will bring us through in His perfected will? We must, surely, we must...TRUST. ©December 31, 2001 Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!!!No matter what else He is there. I love this poem. Thank you. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) BRAVO!!!! Yes, He is always here for us all, and His love will never fail us, for as long as we hold trust close to our heart, love will always find a way! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is a true treasure! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Virginia, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Lily B Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 91Auburn, IN, US |
*still laughing!* Ahhh, your line about the dog laying "a big one... in the rime" took me by surprise and made me laugh out loud. Thanks... :) ~Julie~ |
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