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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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Out there under the stars, in the wind and the sea, I hear you calling to me. Heart so free that captured me, I go willingly to you. All that you see and cannot see of me I offer to thee. The whole of me, floating to you, over space, over time, over distance, over the wind and the sea. For I hear you calling to me, Jaime. /pip/Forum53/HTML/000430.html link to Jaime's poem, The Sun Revised [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (01-07-2002 09:59 PM).] |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, Kacy, always listen to the wind, and especially in combination with the sea...very nicely done..very gentle smile |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Logan, you always know just what to say. Gentle smile and hugs to you. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
How tender - always listen to the song that your heartstrings plays for that is the purest music there is. ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Sharon, you hear my song clearly, and understand these heartstrings. Thank you, sweet sister poetess. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I hear you calling rather my heart hears the call and it fills my heart Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kacy, I do believe you have this listening technique down pretty well...and Jaime appears to be a very lucky fellow... or so I would believe...  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Kacy, this is very lovely...did he hear you answer his call?  Hugs Nancy. ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Kacy, enjoyed...I have had this feeling myself...Just the moment of listening is enjoyable... |
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Joe Houck Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 324california |
I really liked this poem....a very nice rythum to it. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this lovely calling is destined to allure the love of your life into your arms forever! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* love is surely calling your name on the gentle breeze. This poem is so tender and very beautiful...I love it...and I am sure he will too. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Interloper, you never fail to amaze me, do you have hundreds of these tucked away just waiting to be released? Sunshine, thank you for your tenderness. Enchantreess, our ears hear the same tunes. Magnus, thank you for your reply and tenderness. Joe, glad you enjoyed the rhythm and the message. Noah, you are always so supportive and kind! Startime, thanks for the sigh and reply, and for always being here with an open heart. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Beautifully done, Kacy... I could almost hear music with it... It is almost more like a song than a poem. Great job!  copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
oh Kacy so true these words....listening to the wind brought me to where I am today....and I am ever so happy...I wish you the best :-) Kathy -------------- |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Lyra, thank you for that reply. I was listening to Kitaro's CD 'Thinking of You' when I wrote it. Kathy, you've made such a wonderful move because you listened to your heartsong and not the doubts of other voices. Thanks for reading and replying to this one, sweet friend. And thank you for encouraging me last year to keep writing, and to post here at this site. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is lovely, such a hope in the words. Kathleen-- |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Kathleen, thank you for your comment. Yes, there is hope, I have great hope that dreams do come true. (And I really like that signature quote!) |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Midnitesun, I take it that was more than a yoo hoo! Okay, I get it. And I always enjoy your poems that include the sea...I mean love.  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, Larry. Yes, more than a little You Who in this one. Love is in the air...and the wind, and the sea, and the sun and the moon and the stars, and the trees, and the Rockies....well, guess it's everywhere, even blooming in the desert. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Midnitesun~ I love the sea, especially when it whispers, and calls....lovely thoughts here, very moving... Lauren~ Tomorrow's another day |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Lauren, thank you. The call of the sea and whispering winds are some of my favorite memories, and when love notes float in the wind, they beckon me to listen and follow with my heart. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
All that you see and cannot see of me I offer to thee. The totality of this is stunning, Kacy! |
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Ocelot Junior Member
since 2002-01-07
Posts 40Texas |
Kudos, very nicely done. Flowed very nicely...listening to the wind can be a key to finding the answers of your heart. +| ... Ocelot ... |+ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Duncan, so nice to have a visit from you, I haven't seen you for a while. Thank you for your wonderful reply. I hope this year is flowing gently for you. Ocelot, thank you for reading and sharing this. And once again, welcome to Pips. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Midnitesun- This is beautifully penned. I really enjoyed the flow of this piece. Very nicely done. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thank you, Vicky. I enjoyed 'hearing'this one and then sharing it. |
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