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Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

0 posted 2002-01-01 01:54 PM

I Kiss Away Your Tears

I feel the pain within your heart
across the distant miles
I can see the years of your life
with all it’s many trials

While reaching across time and space
I kiss away your tears
Holding you close within my arms
I try to sooth your fears

I hear the anguish from your soul
as tears slide down your face
I gently touch my lips to yours
with hopes the pain, erase

When your hurt and pain are so deep
I feel so bad for you
It makes me want to weave again
I dream a dream for you

I reach to you so far away
and share a thought or two
I want to tell you what I feel,
I’m still in love with you

Karen Torbiak 2002 ©

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Lily B
Member

since 2000-03-31

Posts 91
Auburn, IN, US

1 posted 2002-01-01 01:59 PM

Very nice!!

I especially like "... makes me want to weave again / I dream a dream for you."

:)

~Julie~

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-01-01 02:02 PM

(smiles) So compassionate and beautiful, sweet friend, your tears always sparkle with hope and love to us all! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, HAPPY NEW YEAR!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Jamie
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since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

3 posted 2002-01-01 02:02 PM

lovely poem..the longing and love shine through.

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2002-01-01 03:15 PM

Very nice Karen...sometimes we all need someone to kiss away our pain...James

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2002-01-01 03:27 PM

How very beautiful, Karen. This is a tender and wonderful way to begin a new year. Have a happy day, and keep sharing your warmest thoughts.

May the ripple of LOVE
become the wave of PEACE

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

6 posted 2002-01-01 04:20 PM

Karen - a warm writing from that warm heart you have. I have a tear, right here on my cheek. I'll save it for you, to kiss away...

BC

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

7 posted 2002-01-01 04:29 PM

So sweet and romantic, just beautiful.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2002-01-01 04:32 PM

Karen...such a devotion to a very special
person...No man could ever turn down this.
You do weave dreams...dreams we all share
and have within ourselves as well...Don't
stop dreaming...

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

9 posted 2002-01-01 04:52 PM

I wish I could express love like this..you truly have a gift of capturing this so very well. My heart caught in my throat for the recipient.

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

10 posted 2002-01-01 07:44 PM

LidyB....thank you so much...I am glad you like it. **hugs**

Noah...you are a doll...truly the prince of compassion. **big hugs**

Jamie...yes, I have learned to do longing well. Lots of practice. **hugs**

James...so true...sometimes I wish I had someone to do that for me. **big hugs**

Midnightsun...I will keep sharing them as long as I have feelings. I seem to be a creature of emotions...*grin* that can be both good and bad. **big hugs**

Bill...*sigh* I would gladly kiss away your tears if it were possible. **big hugs**

walker...Thank you so much. **big hugs**

Magnus...dreams keep my hopes alive...I love to weave even when there is no not to weave for. **big hugs**

amusemi...I feel others pain very deeply and just needed to put it into words. Thank you for feeling it as strongly as I meant it. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

11 posted 2002-01-27 06:31 PM

hmm...taken off-guard with that last line....

very nice write..i enjoyed...

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"and i'd give up forever to touch you..cause i know you can feel me somehow..." -googoo dolls

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

12 posted 2002-01-27 07:07 PM

This is beautiful, compassionate writing. I think it's like this for most people - when you're in love you want to be that person's saviour or hero...well expressed!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

13 posted 2002-01-27 08:05 PM

Beautiful......... : )

J. K. Mitchell
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since 2002-01-12

Posts 311
GA

14 posted 2002-01-27 08:39 PM

Karen, this is wonderful.
You paint a picture with words that hold nothing but beauty.

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

15 posted 2002-01-27 08:41 PM

Karen this is a very compassionate poem, I love your words. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 727
Wisconsin

16 posted 2002-01-27 10:47 PM

Wow, really feel the Love and care pouring out of this... truly beautiful I must say.

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.

Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

17 posted 2002-01-27 10:57 PM

Karen, this is lovely. Thanks for sharing.

-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

18 posted 2002-01-27 11:09 PM

Surely anyone would feel much better, with your message of love here.
Sandra

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

19 posted 2002-01-27 11:13 PM

just a hug from you would make anyones day brighter! Those kisses are a bonus

you are a fine poetess Karen

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

20 posted 2002-01-27 11:27 PM

Love is it's own reward
and your writing is so deserving of.

Your poetry warms my heart Startime.

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

21 posted 2002-01-27 11:35 PM

Beautiful love filled write sweet lady...
never quit loving or dreaming....
alan

Little_White_Flowers
Junior Member

since 2002-01-27

Posts 23

22 posted 2002-01-27 11:36 PM

Very touching you seem to be in love. I hope that whosever you wrote this about loves you with as much passion as you love them Ü Love it! ~~LWF~~

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

23 posted 2002-01-28 12:13 PM

Karen~

Keep weaving these words, they are a bright light to all that read....HUGS...

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-28-2002 01:25 AM).]

N orth Carolina Girl
Senior Member

since 2001-12-04

Posts 962
NC,USA

24 posted 2002-01-28 10:41 AM

Karen,absolutely wonderful! You expressed your feelings so well.

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

25 posted 2002-01-28 07:04 PM

You are such a loving person, Karen, it just flows from your pen to these fine pages.....

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

26 posted 2002-01-28 08:31 PM

This is a beautiful, passionate poem Karen. You have a very kind heart.

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