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Loves Arrival - Duet by Larry & Tracey
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Loves Arrival - Duet by Larry & Tracey |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States 
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Loves Arrival by Larry& Tracey I started to believe that day would never arrive When love would finally come to my door But there you stood wearing that knowing grin An instant reflection of all that I adore How did you know my heart waited for you Through long lonely nights, of sorrow and blue I waited so long for the touch of your heart I waited so long for this new love to start So eager I was to invite you in But I took a moment just to stare Not a doubt about what I saw Anticipating what we would share As you held your heart so close to mine Heartbeat in tandem, a love so divine Two held in oneness, a beautiful kiss Forever melded in wondrous bliss At last the one that I had waited for All that anticipation about to be met You, my dear love, who makes my heart soar Forever will hold us in loves sweet duet Thank you Tracey for this fun project! [This message has been edited by Larry C (01-06-2002 05:03 PM).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* sweet romance....I love it.....I love the feel and the way you both pulled it together. BRAVO!!!! I am very impressed...this poem feels so good. **big hugs** to you both.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Karen, Nice words from one who knows romance so well. Thank you. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Larry & Tracy - very nice flow, very nice words you two romantics you... BC |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Bill, From one romantic too another (assuming Tracey make jump in here somewhere): Thanks! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Standing Ovation for Tracey and Larry!!! Expertly penned you two! What a wonderfully romantic duet! ~Hugs to you both, from 'this' Nancy Lee~ ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Nancy Lee, I'm thrilled you liked it. These are fun to do. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  STANDING OVATION!!! OH MY GOSH, I LOVE THIS, THIS IS SOOOOOOO GORGEOUS!!! (smiles) You and Tracey both are soooooooo romantic, this is a heavenly love duet! I LOVE IT!!! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSS) We all love you both so much, sweet friends! You have such a beautiful hearts, sweet Tracey and Larry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
What a tender poem. I love how you presented it with the two colors and your names in color letting us know who wrote what. Nice. floria |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Oh wow you two....ohhhh wow....such tender thoughts are revealed within these words....delightful read.... Lauren~ Tomorrow's another day |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Noah, You seem to know romaticism pretty well. Thanks. floria, Thanks. Glad you enjoyed. Lauren, Thank you so very much. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I love reading love duets, and this one is especially beautiful. Thank you Tracey and Larry! |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Just wanted to stop in to say thank you to everyone for reading and commenting. Larry, it was great fun doing this with you... even if I did screw up the other one on you!!Lol. I will get back to it though If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Kacy, Thanks a train load! Tracey, LOL I probably had it coming. Glad you stopped in on our project. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Great job on this, Larry and Tracey. Your styles blend well together. |
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Ocelot Junior Member
since 2002-01-07
Posts 40Texas |
This one gave me chills...I really really really liked how you guys did this! Two great minds working together to write a love poem. Marvelous. Kudos to you guys! +| ... Ocelot ... |+ |
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Ocelot Junior Member
since 2002-01-07
Posts 40Texas |
This one gave me chills...I really really really liked how you guys did this! Two great minds working together to write a love poem. Marvelous. Kudos to you guys! +| ... Ocelot ... |+ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Nancy and Larry now don't you tarry write out another ...thus speaks your mother. Loved this it was so gentle and smooth. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Duncan, Thanks, we appreciate that alot. Ocelot, Holy cow! Thanks we are doubley pleased... (By the way, that has happened to me) Mom, Okay, just so you don't send us to our rooms. However, that is where we do our best work! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Glad I didn't miss this gem! Congrats to the two of you...this flowed very smoothly, like a dance in which the partners are in complete synch with each other...very nice job, you two!  |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Balladeer, See...I can dance! Thanks this was really fun. It's great to work with Tracey on these kind of projects. |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
BRAVISSIMO!!!! Loved the intermingling of the heart's dance in each of your magnificently penned verses. A heavenly duet. ***Ivy Rose |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Ivy Rose, And we had fun doing it. Thanks so much. |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
This is a duet nicely penned Its thoughts & words very well blend Congrats to you and your lady friend Hope you two keep up the trend.... Liked this, Larry & Tracie... |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
amigo, I liked what you had to say, It really made my day. This poetry really does pay, We'll do another, don't dismay. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Wow! This was absolutely fantastic. Larry and Tracey, you compliment each other so very well and I loved each and every verse. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Hey Sue, Great. Glad you liked it since you're an expert on romantic poetry. Hope the smoke has cleared in Austrailia. |
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