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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Take my eyes. They work too well. They have seen too much of hell. Take my lips now bare of kissed. Take them please. They won't be missed. Take my ears. They only hear the agony of loveless tears. Take my heart, it's here for you. Take my soul now dead by truth. I am not really here at all. So take it, as I haunt the halls... each dawn I search for crypt to keep, entombed among my memories... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Karen, I know just how you feel, and I am so happy that this is just a re-post, for it is such a sad and grievous feeling to no longer sense anything in the floods of tears through early pain and sorrow. (sigh) May all these tears be replaced with joy and may you see, hear, feel, and speak with loves magic! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, HAPPY NEW YEAR!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
a lovely yet hauntingly sad piece Serenity--- reminds me a bit of take another piece of my heart by JJ. take care-  JThere is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Serenity ... this is so hauntingly beautiful. So much depth to the sadness you have captured in this piece, very well done indeed! Best wishes and hugs for a Happy New Year, /Kit |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Sadness and loneliness flow through each word of this poem. One felt the feeling of being entombed alone and without hope. Amazing. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I know this feeling, once I was put in a closet for three days with no light.....I could never write of it though..I just forget...somehow and go on...this made me relive part of it though  I am/Kathleen/ |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Sometimes we feel like that, thank God it passes for most of us. Great thoughts here. [This message has been edited by walker (01-01-2002 04:42 PM).] |
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