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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2002-01-06 02:33 PM



Fields Of Lavender And Roses
~*~

Sleeping, I lay in fields of lavender
my soul craves fragrant moonlit nights
moonbeams in colors of roses
your loving whisper
sets my frosted windowpane aflame
white chiffon flowing in fields of pink roses
you stand before me
as I fall like a sparrow from it’s nest
bracing for my final destiny
you catch me in the palm of your hand
cradled in crushed lavender blossoms
and lovely pink rosebuds
I’m not alone

~*~
2002

© Copyright 2002 DebraS. - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-01-06 02:36 PM




(sigh) You are sooooooooo romantic, sweet friend, you always describe falling in love so heavenly! BRAVO!!! (kiss on cheek) May the sparrow of your heart always sing eternal loves medley to your loving heart! We all love you so much, sweet friend, you had me feeling I was dreaming in this meadow of flowers! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Debra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-01-06 02:58 PM


lovely images, beautifully written Deb as always..

              ~Vic

"To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides."
~ David Viscott


                                            


Ivy Rose
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3 posted 2002-01-06 03:14 PM


WONDERFUL IMAGERY AND MAGICAL WORDING MAKE THIS POEM MAGNIFICENT!!!!!

***Ivy Rose

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4 posted 2002-01-06 03:20 PM


Beautiful Debra...soft and gentle...lovely.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

BloomingRose
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5 posted 2002-01-06 04:03 PM


Noah~ Thank you

Victoria~ Thank you may the buttefly of peace be with you today

Nancy~ Very kind words sweet lady. I thank you.

Ivy~ Sweet reply. *Hugs* btw~ love your name.

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2002-01-06 04:14 PM


Sweet...James
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7 posted 2002-01-06 09:51 PM


I have been looking for this field for a long time, what a beautiful place to lay back and day dream....lovely write~...


Lauren~

Tomorrow's another day
and I'm thirsty any way
so bring on the rain

Startime
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8 posted 2002-01-06 09:54 PM


STUNNING...I love the look and feel of this poem. It is so tenderly yearning. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

BloomingRose
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9 posted 2002-01-07 10:34 AM


James~ Thank you

Lauren~ Hope you find that field of dreams one day. Thank you for reading. *hugs*

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