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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-01-06 02:13 PM

My Next Time

it’s too late
for me this time
but my
next time around
I’ll hold another
oh so tight
they will never
hit the ground
sing them
softly to sleep
watch them
as they dream
wake them
in passion
live every day
as a team
I’ll write them
love poems
my ink will
never run dry
even in
my anger
show love
in full supply
there is so much
I won’t neglect
to say
for next time around
I want
love to stay

"I have already paid for all my future sins." Sade...(King of Sorrow)

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2002-01-06 02:14 PM

Sad words, but hopeful, from your pen to my heart today.

Kathleen--
Neither genius, fame, nor love show the greatness of the soul.
Only kindness can do that. ~Jean Baptiste Henri Lacordaire~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-01-06 02:16 PM

(smiles) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, such optimism fills your words, love will always find a way, and may its beauty fill your heart with joy always! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2002-01-06 02:22 PM

I like this...written like a true veteran of a love war. A lot of strength and understanding in your words.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-01-06 02:38 PM

Helen, I can relate to this. Well said.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2002-01-06 04:05 PM

helen - Just wanted to say I’ve had the same thoughts. You wrote about yours, and very well indeed. May your ink never run dry, to write those love poems to someone special…

BC

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

6 posted 2002-01-06 04:23 PM

kathleen...we do seem to echo each other...helen

noah...you are so sweet...how could i not adore you?...helen

senerity...yes a veteran...i have lost this battle...just not the war...helen

enchantress...i'm sorry you are too a veteran...helen

bill...you always make me smile...helen

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

7 posted 2002-01-07 02:16 PM

What wonderful thoughts. I only want to know if you're planning on having more than one...

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

8 posted 2002-01-07 08:32 PM

Doubt very seriously that it's "too late" as you say...not for most; especially not for you.

jwesley

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

9 posted 2002-01-12 02:13 PM

beautiful write
I must say ... your persistent

Sunset
Member

since 2002-01-08

Posts 80

10 posted 2002-01-12 02:35 PM

This is beautiful. I echo those thoughts completely. We learn and grow with experience. My compliments, Helen.

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