Old Screaming (magnetic - serenity's challenge)

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Open Poetry #18

Old Screaming (magnetic - serenity's challenge)

Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03

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0 posted 2002-01-06 11:33 AM

Old Screaming  (magnetic)

Why write from old screaming?

Imagine his experiment

how electric blue like music

and free passion

then

as empty as silhouette

he paints pictures of smoke

in black and white

©  01.06.02

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[This message has been edited by Krawdad (01-06-2002 11:40 AM).]

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

1 posted 2002-01-06 11:35 AM

Short and to the point and a wonderful write. floria

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2002-01-06 01:45 PM

Old screaming...love the title, e! that's exactly why I wanted to do something different, everything I wrote felt like echoes of old screaming (not that I want anything NEW to scream about--serenity talks to the ceiling, pointedly)

What I like about this is sort of frees up the brain into fragments of vision...challenge, well met!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

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Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-01-06 01:50 PM

BRAVO!!! I LOVE IT!!! Passion shines through these words like electricity, sweet friend, you always write so wonderfully! I need to give this challenge a try too! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!