Open Poetry #18 |
Thoughts for You |
Dusty Rhodes Junior Member
since 2001-10-14
Posts 27 |
Here we are in the hereafter time Where we hold close in our being I try to give my thoughts to rhyme To let you feel the me, without seeing Letting the words wash over and around As a cascade of flow to make them pure With the feel of a waterfall falling down Erasing all doubts and making you sure Read my words with the touch of braille Fingertips lightly touching with the drift of feel As we ride the boat of destiny under full sail Where all things can happen, and all be real Let these thoughts swirl to our way We will soar to the skies in a magic of time For in your smile, I see you heard my say With our clasp of hands, we become sublime [This message has been edited by Dusty Rhodes (01-06-2002 04:02 AM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Another Traveler, I see...well done, Dusty... This likes me... |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
This is a very touching write, Dusty. Thanks for sharing with all of us. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Mmmm Dusty, this just picked me up and carried me along sooooo smoothly, then set me down oh so gently at the end....love it. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* you put so many of the things I love in this poem that I was transported magically into your words. *sigh* I love it and I love the way it made me feel. Well done. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Soooooooo lovely, sweet friend, may you forever ride destiny with the love of your life on eternity's stream into Eden! (big hugggsssss) You are soooooo romantic, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dusty, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
" We will soar to the skies" nice write, floria |
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